Can someone view my resume and give me some kind of feedback?

Question

Objective Presently seeking an administrative assistant position where I can work with a creative team of individuals, where promotional opportunities are achievable.
Experience 1998–Present U.S. Security Associates New York, NY
Supervisor ( Young & Rubicam Brands)
• Answer phones, faxes and emails.
• Assist customers / clients with incoming questions
• Monthly reports and theft reports.
• Schedule and payroll.
1996–1998 162nd Dental Office New York, NY
Receptionist
• Responsible for updating calendar and scheduling appointments.
• Filing and creating records for new patients
• Assisting patients with incoming questions.
• Follow-up calls, after patients visit.
• Answer the phones and fax.
• Verify insurance coverage / co pay.
1994–1996 Ronald Gerard Delphin, M.D. New York, NY
Receptionist
• Filing and creating records for new patients
• Answer the phones and fax.
• Verify insurance coverage.
Education 2002-2006 Bronx Community College Bronx, NY
A.A., Liberal Arts / Early Childhood Development.
2006-Present Lehman College Bronx, NY
B.A., Major: History and a Minor: Early Childhood Education
Certificates / SKILLS
• CPR/AED, First Aid and Fire guard certificate
• Lotus Notes
• Microsoft Word, Microsoft Outlook, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel,
• Customer service skills
• Proactive and detailed oriented
• Bilingual English / Spanish.

*furnish reference up on request.

Answer 1

In the objective: "where promotional opportunities are available" not are achievable - or just ", with opportunity for advancement" which is probably better

Under experience: just questions, not incoming questions - what other kind are there?

On your BA - the way you state it, is ambiguous as to whether you've completed it. Since you say "-present", I'm assuming you haven't, so I'd say something like "working toward BA..." or "completion expected xxxxxxx".

I wouldn't put SKILLS all in caps unless I put "certificates", experience, and education all in caps also - either way is OK but be consistent.

last line - no space in the middle of upon - and might say "References available...: rather than "*furnish reference..."

Other than those few minor things, looks pretty good.

Good luck.