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ode to garwy
this will do well
with folk who don't know
a poem from a cardboard box
goldilocks
you’ve stolen your topic
how unphilanthropic
and your metre’s a Longfellow
rip-off
despicable hag
deserves a red flag
but that would require a
keystroke
so listen up bloke,
while your chicken you choke
lend us no more
obnoxity
*****
2007-09-22 00:33:30 · 12 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Well, send him to me. I'll straighten him out! Love your ode.
2007-09-22 03:58:49 · answer #1 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
TD, I think it might be refreshing if I just got the "I hate your poetry e-mails." I usually just get the "I hate you personally e-mails." It's hard being so polarizing lol. At least in this thread, garwy answered back cleverly--I can sort of appreciate that despite the conflict.
I enjoyed your ode. I actually haven't seen a lot from you lately--and I've missed that.
Best,
Todd
2007-09-22 01:08:48 · answer #2 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I recognize this! You stole it from a cardboard box!
I have just checked his answers...I see what you mean.
Some people just take themselves too seriously here.
Your ode made me laugh, anyway!
2007-09-22 00:57:07 · answer #3 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Crikey!!
I went and had a read.
I can't take the agony.
You make me beg and plead,
Not to pen those painful memories.
I have
.
Sensitive
.
Brain
.
Waves.. snap,snap,snap,snap
2007-09-22 00:54:08 · answer #4 · answered by Marla ™ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
All I can say is: I <3 you.
2007-09-22 03:05:10 · answer #5 · answered by Cinnibuns 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great poem as always as you really have a great gift for writing,, Shelly
2007-09-22 01:39:31 · answer #6 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hilarious!
Kudos to the witty response.
2007-09-22 00:42:29 · answer #7 · answered by Vol 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
e.e. cummings never hit the shift key either. Poetry is more than CAPITALIZATION.
2007-09-22 01:38:58 · answer #8 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'll answer this
without much fuss:
mr. euwaite
you're td ious
....
but seriously: you need to watch 'the dead poets' society'. that movie could teach you a lot.
2007-09-22 01:00:25 · answer #9 · answered by synopsis 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its a little different but it needs to be more from the heart.
2007-09-22 00:41:17 · answer #10 · answered by MorneauFan#33 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋