Got a hood on your eyes so I can’t see ya
Invisible I cant feel ya
Imaginary friend
In the back of my mind
A clock in time
You’re the mister
On to miss
The kiss inside copulates
is the one I reminisce
The one melted
The one under your fist
The one in side warming the persist
You think that this is
What
No baby no crush
This I s a vase encased with no dust
The allusion
Of you I cant’
It is a must
I love you and in you I trust
2007-09-21 11:03:50 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
SORRY THINK!!!!
2007-09-21 11:05:46 · update #1
If you are gonna write negative things don't comment at all!!!!!!!!
2007-09-22 00:57:12 · update #2
fix the few spelling errors and it's pretty good
2007-09-21 11:09:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
If it is supposed to be a love poem, I must say, it is one of the most stale, most plastic and most loveless love poems I've come across in these links.
But with more effort, more feeling and a bit of rhyme and rhythm, you could certainly better express your love and trust for "you".
good luck
2007-09-21 21:04:21 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋