Needed tonight!!! Is this translation from english to spanish correct?

Question

Is this translation correct? We have to write it for Spanish class, and I'm not sure if it is right...

Hi! My name is Cassie. I go to FAU High School. I get good grades in school. I am funny. My best friends are Jeanette and Joanna. We like Disney movies. I love animals. My favorite show is 8 Simple Rules. I like to drink Diet Coke.

Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Voy FAU High School. Consigo buenos grados en escuela. Soy divertido. Mis mejores amigos son Jeanette y Joanna. Amamos la peliculas de Disney. Amo animales. Mi demostracion preferida es 8 Simple Rules. Tengo gusto de beber Diet Coke.

Thanks!

Answer 1

below is the corrected paragraph:

¡Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Voy a la escuela secundaria FAU. Consigo buenos grados en la escuela. Soy divertida. Mis mejores amigas son Jeanette y Joanna. Amamos las peliculas de Disney. Amo los animales. Mi programa preferido es 8 Simple Rules. Me gusta beber Diet Coke.

Answer 2

Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Voy a FAU High School. Consigo buenos grados en escuela. Soy muy chistosa. Mis mejores amigas son Jeanette y Joanna. Amamos la peliculas de Disney. Me encantan los animales. Mi programacion de television preferida es 8 Simple Rules. Me gusta beber Diet Coke.

Just a few minor corrections. Good Job!

Answer 3

No it isn't . The correct one is:

Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Yo voy a FAU High School.Consigo buenos notas en la escuela. Mis mejores amigos son Jeanette y Joanna. Amo a las peliculas de disney. Amo animales. Mi demostracion preferida es 8 SImple Rules. Me gusta beber Diet coke.

Answer 4

It's pretty good,but
there are several errors here.
Here's my rendition with explanation of errors afterwards.
¡Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Asisto a FAU High School
Saco buenos notas en la escuela.
Soy graciosa. Mis mejores amigos son Jeanette y Joanna.
Nos gustan las películas de Disney. Soy muy aficionada
de animales. Mi programa favorito es 8 Simple Rules.
Me gusta beber Diet Coke.

1. Voy a Fau High. That means you go(travel) there.
You really mean I attend Fau High. To attend = asistir a.

2. The idiom for "to get good grades" is
"sacar buenas notas".

3. Divertido. It's been pointed out here
that it means fun to be around.
Someone who is funny is gracioso or chistoso.

4. Amar = to love in the romantic sense.
To love something very much requires gustar or
gustar mucho or encantar.

5. demostración is a demonstration. In other
words showing someone something.
Película for movie or show is better.
TV program= el programa.

6. I like to drink = Me gusta beber.

Answer 5

i can help with part of it but some words i dont know try an online translator for those:
Hola! Me llamo Cassie. Voy a FAU High School. Tengo(or preferably recibo which im pretty sure is to recieve) buenas notas en escuela. Soy comico. Mis amigas mejores se llaman Jeanette y Joanna. Nos gustan las peliculas de Disney. Me aman los animals (amo or aman i can remember). Mi (word for show: use translator) favorito se llama 8 simple rules or es 8 simple rules. me gusta beber coca cola.

GL im in spanish 2 and some of this i just forget or w/e
but again, use a translator and i hope sum1 else gives better stuff. what i put down is correct i know for sure. GL

Answer 6

THAT IS GOOD. HERE'S ANOTHER . Hola mi nombre es Cassie,estoy en la preparatoria FAU,saco buenas calificasiones y soy alegre o divertida.Mis mejores amigas son Jeanette y Joanna nos gusta ver peliculas de Disney.Me gustan los animales.Mi programa preferido es 8 Simples Reglas y me gusta tomar coca cola de dieta.

Answer 7

Little changes so its absolutely perfect, ok? Otherwise very good.

Hola! Me llamo Cassi.

Asisto a FAU High School (or "asisto al colegio FAU")

Siempre tengo buenas notas en la escuela (or you can use "sacar", "siempre saco buenas notas en la escuela).

Soy chistosa. (you can also say "soy alegre", "soy simpatica")

Mis mejores amigas son Jeanette y Joanna.

Nos encantan las peliculas Disney.

Me fascinan los animales.

Mi programa favorito es 8 Simple Rules (8 reglas simples).

Me gusta beber Diet Coke. (or, "me gusta TOMAR Diet Coke...or in chile we call it "coca light")

Ok, this is what i did so you learn from this too :)

1. you can say "voy" but the best word to use is "asistir" with means to attend

2. conseguir is a good word, but most people use tener when speaking about grades, NOTAS, not GRADOS....grados refer to degrees (temperature, etc)

3. you are a girl, so when you describe yourself, like when you said "im funny" the adjective ends with an A (feminine form if available...some words like "inteligente, alegre" end in E for both masculine and feminine" so you would say "soy divertidA" but that simply means FUN, fun to be around. Funny would be chistosa. I read in a lot of other answers where they didn't take that into consideration and left it in masculine form.

4. To say you love someTHING in spanish is different than to love someONE. Amar is used when talking about loving another person. The correct verb to use is ·"encantar", or "fascinar". (me encantan las peliculas, me encanta la musica, me fascina ir de compras, me fascinan los animales)

5. tv show: serie, programa.

6. To like something in spanish is "gustar" (me gusta estudiar, me gustan mis profesores, me gusta beber coca cola)

this is perfect. good luck :)

Answer 8

hmmm...
voy A FAU High School
consigo buenas grados en LA escuela
A MI ME GUSTA beber Diet Coke

this sounds better :-)

Answer 9

Voy a FAU high school.
Saco buenas notas en la escuela


these are 2 corrections

Answer 10

i suggest this:

hola! me llamo cassie. la preparatoria a la que yo voy se llama FAU. me saco buenas calificaciones. soy chistosa. mis mejores amigas son jeanette y joanna. nos gustan las peliculas de disney. yo amo a los animales. my programa favorito de television es '8 simple rules.' me gusta tomar diet coke