Please look at this and see if it is well understandable.
"It's through the capacity to feel that we discover ourselves and others and explore the potential for a full ,significant life."
2007-09-16 21:24:24 · 4 answers · asked by Gone Car 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
How about this instead...
"Our emotions allow us to discover ourselves and others and explore the potential of a full and meaningful existence."
Is that better?
Let me know!
2007-09-16 21:41:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is understandable, but you should move the comma to "others, "; no comma after "full".
"It's through the capacity to feel that we discover ourselves and others, and explore the potential for a full significant life."
2007-09-17 04:30:37 · answer #2 · answered by The Dragon 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's a little vague as to the type of discovery
2007-09-17 04:28:05 · answer #3 · answered by ladybugewa 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would change the "the"s to "our"s myself.
And it is a little vague.
2007-09-17 05:07:04 · answer #4 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋