I'm throwing a bridal sower for my best friend, it's a desert/tea party themed bridal shower. I'm pretty hand with photo shop nad am amking my own invitations but I'm clueless on poems to go on it.
She said will and now she waits
For the most special of honored dates
To help the time fly by
Join us for cake and pie!
Bring a long a gift or two
As we celebrate her upcoming I do!
I wrote that one but I'm not sure I like it! any other suggestions?
2007-09-15 07:10:50 · 6 answers · asked by pixi_doll 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Weddings
the gift line is really whats bothering me.......hmmmm
2007-09-15 07:28:53 · update #1
Mike asked Laura and she said yes
What I bet you can already guess
One life will be formed from two
Join us as we celebrate Laura saying I do!
2007-09-15 09:05:55 · update #2
Star light, star bright!
BRIDE has found her Mr. Right!
Come help us shower the star-struck couple
BRIDE
and
GROOM
on DATE
at TIME
LOCATION
CITY, STATE
NAMES OF HOSTESSES
Go to
http://verseit.com/VerseIt_VerseChoices.cfm
for more options. Click on wedding, then shower.
2007-09-15 07:20:21 · answer #1 · answered by Suz123 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It doesn't have to be a poem if you convey the theme with pretty paper and tea pot graphics, etc.
Rhyming poems are just really unnecessary.
Wait-- do you mean tea party is what the THEME is, or that's what's going to be SERVED? That's two different things! If you are not serving a meal, that needs to be made clear.
Miss Sally Smith
Invites you for for tea and desserts
As we shower the bride
Miss Jane Jones
With useful gifts, cheerful advice, and all our best wishes!
Time
Date
Place
RSVP
2007-09-15 23:50:08 · answer #2 · answered by Etiquette Gal 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You do not mention gifts on an invitation....that's very rude. You definately need to delete that line and replace it with something else. Otherwise you have a good start.
Is she that kind of girl? I am definately not the cutesy poem type of gal so having one of those on my invites would be really wierd...just something to think about.
The went on dates she liked his kiss
Now Jane will no longer be Miss
He proposed and she said YES!
And we knew for this party the Sheraton would be best
So join us on the 8th of July
Come and enjoy some cake and pie
to shower the happy bride with wishes
For soon our Jane will be Mrs.
2007-09-15 14:20:42 · answer #3 · answered by pspoptart 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Why not look at bridal shower cards in stores for inspiration. You shouldn't copy them directly, but you could use them as a guide.
2007-09-15 15:39:28 · answer #4 · answered by soupkitty 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
do something more simple like
we would be delighted
If you could join us for afternoon tea
to shower the bride to be
2007-09-15 16:11:38 · answer #5 · answered by jenn p 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The gift thing HAS to go...plus "along" is one word, not two.
2007-09-15 15:10:54 · answer #6 · answered by Bill 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋