i'm italian and i dont speak english very well.....i have a homework:write a description of a tipical day at work or school for you or somewone you know.
please halp me......i'm disperated.....
i go to school at 7.30 whith bus the schoole starter at 8 ......at 10 30 breck.....at 12.20 the school is end......and y go to house .......and.......i have a lunck at 1 .i go out whit my friends, i study i help my mum at house.......sometimes i go to school at afternoon i have a dinner at 7.... at evening i wotking tv
please halp me.......
2007-09-12 06:03:19 · 4 answers · asked by Ali 5 in Society & Culture ➔ Etiquette
well you just described your day to us.
now you put it in the form of an essay.
you can elaborate on your activities and what you do during school and breaks and so on.
if you are writting this essay in english make sure you use microsoft word and spell/grammar check before you save and print this document.
2007-09-12 06:12:50 · answer #1 · answered by nataliexoxo 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
(or spell very well, either -- which is understandable, as English spelling is a killer)
What you want is 'help' and you need to write about a 'typical' day.
Well, you've given the outline of a typical day of school. Just fill out the details a bit. Do you eat? Talk to family at all?
Where do you catch the bus? Do you sit any particular place? Talk to any particular bus friends? What sorts of things do you talk about? Or do you look out the window, read, or what?
What do you do during break? Where do you spend it?
Is anyone home when you get home for lunch? Do you just walk in the door, eat, and leave?
What sorts of things do you do with your friends?
What sorts of things do you do to help your mum?
What do you watch on TV?
As I say, you've written the outline, you just need to give more details.
"Sometimes my friends and I...." Other times we ...."
2007-09-12 07:52:00 · answer #2 · answered by tehabwa 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Start by using Check Spelling, at least fix the spelling errors to show that you have some gumption, then re- post.
2007-09-15 03:26:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ma che ci fai qua? ma dimmi te dove vai a chiedere... 8 punti!!
2007-09-14 07:40:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋