Ok so i have the best-est-est friends in the world and i write poems but i dont think they are really good but when i show my friends them they say I am a really good writer. But i don't think they are really good poems so i was wondering do you think my friends are just saying that becasue they are being nice or being my friends or do they really mean it???
2007-09-11 15:00:21 · 4 answers · asked by Jaimjaim 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
oh sorry i shoudl include a poem ok here is one:
One door closes
Two more open
Everything you say
Has a meaning that you can change
Life is taken from one extreme
To the other
My heart is closed
My knees are shaking
My mind explodes for the excitement
That I have taken in
The world I see has color and beauty
The world you see might be dark and scary
Rainbows and ponies
Trees with arms and clouds with eyes
You control the world you see
The world you see before your eyes
You lay down the law
You choose to follow
You choose what you choose to do
When you lay down on your bed
And close your eyes
And go to sleep
You find a world
That you can’t resist
It can’t be beat
Because you made it
And all you had to do
Was close your eyes
And make a wish
And count……
1......2……3
2007-09-11 15:01:52 · update #1
Well..yes most of your friends will most likely say anything is 'good' just because they are your friend.(you'd know if you had a way too honest friend).
But...your poem was good. (and I'm a stranger who cares nothing about you and if it was bad would have no problem saying so and writing something mean and vile).
You should post some more...I think there is a 'Answers' poem spot...
2007-09-11 15:09:09 · answer #1 · answered by null_the_living_darkness 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good initially, when you like her, ask her on a date. It turns out that possibly she likes you, but when she doesnt, and considers you a exceptional buddy, good you men are well peers, and do stuff for eachother, she relys on you in view that she customarily trusts you greater than any person. And whilst she advised the fellow she would possibly not of been loose, both ment in view that she likes spending the weekends with you, and most of the time likes you, or in view that she doesnt like this dude. Hope this helped.
2016-09-05 10:49:37 · answer #2 · answered by generazio 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I♥it
Some of the lines seem familar some how
2007-09-11 15:04:40 · answer #3 · answered by Typical Single Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's good, everyone's taste is different but i really like it... think ur freinds are most likely telling u the truth when they say they think they're good.
2007-09-11 15:10:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋