Can you correct this text for me please? Summit on the Kyoto Protocol?

Question

The chemical composition of land and water is changing: the acidity of the oceanic waters is higher and the coral reef is heavily threatened. These problems have been discussed during the 11th summit of the UNO on the climate change in Montreal from the last 28th November to the 9th December. This summit was crucial to start the official negotiations on the so-called post-Kyoto phase. Although China and India were willing to discuss on a compulsory reduction of the greenhouse gas emissions after 2012, the protocol has been in doubt until the last day, because the United States never wanted to accept to commit themselves to reduce the emissions. Only at the last moment, urged by the speech of the former president Bill Clinton on the final day, the American delegation participating to the multilateral meetings decided to discuss on the strategies for the post-Kyoto phase. Therefore, on the last day in Montreal, there was a sensational change that has re-established a good relationship ..

...between the EU and the US.

Answer 1

The chemical composition of land and water is changing: the acidity of the oceanic waters is higher and the coral reef is heavily threatened. These problems were discussed during the 11th summit of the UNO on climate change in Montreal from 28th November to 9th December last year. This summit was crucial to start the official negotiations on the so-called post-Kyoto phase. Although China and India were willing to discuss a compulsory reduction in greenhouse gas emissions after 2012, the protocol was in doubt until the last day, because the United States never wanted to commit themselves to reduce emissions. Only at the last moment, urged by former president Bill Clinton, did the American delegation decide to discuss the strategies for the post-Kyoto phase. Therefore, on the last day in Montreal, there was a sensational change that has re-established a good relationship ..

Answer 2

The chemical composition of land and water is changing: the acidity of the oceanic waters is higher and the coral reefs are seriously threatened. These problems were discussed during the 11th summit of the UNO on climate change in Montreal from the 28th November to the 9th December, 2006. This summit was crucial to start the official negotiations on the so-called post-Kyoto phase. Although China and India were willing to discuss a compulsory reduction of greenhouse gas emissions after 2012, the protocol was uncertain until the last day, because the United States did not want to commit to reducing its emissions. Only at the last moment, urged by former president Bill Clinton in his speech on the final day, did the American delegation at the multilateral meetings decide to discuss the strategies for the post-Kyoto phase. Therefore, on the last day in Montreal, there was a sensational change that has re-established a good relationship between the EU and the US.


Sensational sounds odd, but I'm not sure what you want.

Answer 3

The line "Although China and India were willing to discuss on a compulsory reduction of the greenhouse gas emissions after 2012, the protocol has been in doubt until the last day, because the United States never wanted to accept to commit themselves to reduce the emissions" should be "commit them to reduce the emissions."

Answer 4

What do you want us to do? Just correct the grammar?

Answer 5

Nope sorry i cant