Could you re-write my English writing?

Question

I am a self thaught English student. I would appreciate if someone could help me by rewriting my Eng writing. I hope I can find the reason why I made mistakes from the good explanation for me. Thank you.
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*** I am studying about a paragraph and the subject is 'I am good at using computers'. ****

I am good at using computers, particularly, MS office word program. I obtained word processor certification in 2002 when I was in my country, S. Korea. I had developed my computer skills since I got the certification through / from my career relevant to office administrative position / job over five years. My high speed of typing of both Korean and English have me finish on the paper work quickly. For this word skills, I have got a good hobby making up official documents efficiently.

It is more than thank you. I am very impressed by you all. God bless me.

Ok... I wanted to express how much I like make documents for office work. I may be confused of the meaning of 'make up'. I did not mean I like writing document. In my case I really enjoy making good format docuemt. Whenever I see new format / new form of document / papers, I want to try to make it to the same way. It is not really my hobby, haha.. I guess.. I love to spend time to make any paper work. I develop my word skills by practicing with the sample of papers / documents that I find somewhere. That is why one of my friends said that I should be a webdesigner for example. However I don't have any skills of painting and drawing, which is weird. Thank you again.

Answer 1

I am proficient in the use of computers, particularly MS Office programs. I obtained a word processing certification in 2002 while I was in my country, S. Korea. I have developed my computer skills over the last few years, having used a variety of programs for administrative work. I type very well in both Korean and English.

Answer 2

I am good at using computers, particularly the Microsoft Word program. I obtained my word processor certification in 2002 when I was in my country, South Korea. I have developed my computer skills since I got the certification through my job as administrative office assistant over the past five years. My high typing speed in both Korean and English allow me to finish my paper work quickly. Because of my word skills, my new hobby is making up professional-looking official documents.


(How does that sound?? The way you intended, I hope.)

Answer 3

I am good at using computers, particularly (second comma is unnecessary - words are only surrounded by commas if they are a parenthesis) THE PROGRAM (though you could just say MS office Word, as everyone knows that it is a program) MS office word. I obtained A word processor certificatE in 2002 when I was in my country (though it would be better to say "whilst I was in my country"), S. Korea. I HAVE (you have mixed up tenses here) developed my computer skills since I got the certificatE through / from my career relevant to office administrative position / job over five years (this sentance is wrong because you say things unnecesarily. Because you say career, you don't need to say position/job - because all careers are jobs. A better way to say it would be "I have developed my skills over five years because of my job in office administration). My high speed of typing of both Korean and English HELP/ENABLE me TO finish (on and the is unecessary) paperwork (is one word) quickly. For this word skills, I have got a good hobby making up official documents efficiently. (This sentance is strange. A hobby is something you enjoy doing - but is not usually work related. Most people would not consider writing official documents a hobby, as they would not do it for fun, even if they like the fact they can do it well. A better phrase to use would be "I take pride in using my Word (a capital W is needed because it is the name of the program) skills to write official documents efficiently"

Reading what you wrote there you seem to understand English well - though you could learn more by speaking the language to understand English phrases better. You use a few strange sentance constructions, even though your verbs and tenses are ok, and your vocabulary is good.

Answer 4

I'm proficient in computer use, particularly with the MS Word program. In S. Korea in 2002 I obtained my word processor certification. Since then, I've further developed my computer skills through an office administration position I've held for over five years. I'm a fast typist, who practices by creating official documents in my spare time.

(Rather than noting that you can type fast, you might want to take a typing test to find out your words per minute & list that, instead. I was a little confused by the last sentence, too. Not sure if I "got" what you were trying to say there.)

Answer 5

I'm talented with computers, especially with "Microsoft Office." After having developed my computer skills, I obtained a word processor certification in 2002 from my job of over five years, while I was in my country, South Korea. My high typing speed of both Korean and English allow me to be very efficient at finishing papers quickly. Through my experience with word processors, I now have an excellent hobby of making official documents.

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Hope this is what you needed!
Great job learning English!

Answer 6

The Vancouver city worker strike which has lasted for over 50 days is causing problem for many different groups of people. For example, people who like reading books at the library might have to go to another library in a different city. In addition, Vancouver citizens are not able to borrow CDs or videos for watching movies or studying at home. On the other hand, people can hold onto books they have borrowed until the library opens and they will not be required to pay overdue charges during the strike. Garbage removal has also become an issue. The smells are building and private trash haulers charge a strike surcharge to commercial customers. Children and parents in need of help and support are being helped by volunteers. Vancouver citizens are being greatly inconvenienced by the strike.