That's why I fell in love with him, the way he got involved in political causes impressed me.
2007-09-08 10:11:54 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
It would sound better if you said
"The way he got involved with political causes impressed me and that's why I fell in love with him."
2007-09-08 10:19:37 · answer #1 · answered by Sptfyr 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not wrong maybe better, reversed, makes it more logical. Or, why not make 2 sentences in the first place.
The way he got involved in political causes impressed me. That's why I fell in love with him.
Or: As/ Since the way he got involved in political causes impressed me, I fell in love with him.
Or - using your order of clauses:
I fell in love with him as/since the way he got involved in political causes impressed me.
2007-09-08 17:46:09 · answer #2 · answered by woko51 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No.
It would have to be:
That's why I fell in love with him(: ; ―) the way he got involved in political causes impressed me.
2007-09-08 17:24:19 · answer #3 · answered by PW 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
simplify it.
I fell in love with him because he gets
involved with political causes.
(That you were impressed by that is implied.)
2007-09-08 18:42:05 · answer #4 · answered by Bobby Jim 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
replace the comma with a colon.
2007-09-08 17:18:58 · answer #5 · answered by without.question 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋