LADIES,,sensual Poetry?

Question

The evening sun it sets,, do you feel the heat,
on the beach together, where our bodies meet.
glistening in the dusk, naked bodies dance as one,

to the music made by nature, for pleasure and for fun.

Your supple breasts they shine, seeking some ultimate pleasure,
slowly the lips will fall to meet your forbidden treasure,,

feel the strength in arms that tightly wrap around
and the merging of bodies the exciting feel and sound.

kisses into the night,, ecstacy that feels just right..

The excitement of the merge...

Answer 1

oh spare us

Answer 2

although i am a poet i would never use my poems to pick anyone up, poems are viewed as cheesy so it probably wouldn't work unless the person has traveled back in time to when poetry was still new

i dont find that stuff sexy or 'sensual' and its trying to hard to be poetry and be sexy
i prefer real life stuff and stuff thats not been churned out of a try hard machine
im just not a 'sexual' poetry fan

if you look sexy, cute whatever and are a cool person thats enough for most women you dont need that stuff,

if you write and want to use it for picking up, its more impressive to say it in passing, then they become interested and want to see 1 or 2 and that way you wernt being a show off, they see your sensitive as well as sexy and feel like they found it out by accident or themselves

Answer 3

mostly, makes me want to barf!
P.S. no girl wants her private parts called a "treasure" - good luck there bub!

Answer 4

Not into poetry

Answer 5

What's the question?

Answer 6

carefull there, u will have them clawing at there screens

Answer 7

Thanks. Very romantic, as usual Tommy..