"POEM" that I wrote and entered it in a contest. First prize winner...$10,000 dollars and published in a poem book with a little story about myself! Ok here is my "Poem"...
"This is a Title to Alcapoem"... ___________________________
My name is Alcapoem...
I sure did like to rome...
I never stayed at home...
All women loved my dome...
But one day it was gome...
And I was all alome...
A man without his dome...
Sad ending to this "POEM"!
2007-09-08 02:40:38 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
your gonna win! that was great tell me if u win or not!
2007-09-08 02:44:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
While trying to make this poem Rhythmic you have compromised on the meaning of words which i do not understand.
What is Gome ? & Alome ?
I searched the net & i could not find the meaning of these words.
2007-09-08 10:06:48 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
sorry but i dont really like it. i dont like how every line rhymes together, try to put some variety into it!
and on the last line it said sad ending to the "POEM"
...it wasnt so sad i was actually glad that it ended
2007-09-08 09:45:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this peom is pretty good but there are some words in there that did not make sense, Like every word at the ned of the line exept for home and rome.
2007-09-08 09:44:23 · answer #4 · answered by :) Miss Hockey Lover :) 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's funny, but not worth $10,000.
Poems don't need to rhyme as much as say something from the heart.
2007-09-08 09:45:50 · answer #5 · answered by wawawebis 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
It's not tat good but it's good u tried.U used only ryming words tryin using words which r deep & give a message, i think tat will make u win d contest.
2007-09-08 09:56:27 · answer #6 · answered by t.v. lover yo 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Don't enter those contests; they are kind of a scam to sell books, I'm afraid.
2007-09-08 09:45:19 · answer #7 · answered by bonitakale 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
For a contest, i don't think you should use it. i think for a contest, the poem has to be something a little more upscale.
2007-09-08 09:45:42 · answer #8 · answered by mallukutty83 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
try 2 redo some stuff it so it makes more cents.
Email or IM me if u win though.
2007-09-08 09:57:43 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow! You've almost managed to make me rethink liking poetry
2007-09-08 09:49:33 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Were you "alome" or "alone" in this poem? I don't understand it.
2007-09-08 09:45:54 · answer #11 · answered by mrsdebra1966 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋