Today I thought I saw stars, but then realized it was dust. I said "I'm ok I thought I was seeing stars but I was seeing dust" to my friend. I feel like that could be an inspertional quote. Like when you see famous people you think your seeing stars, people living a dream, but it's really not all that great. What are your thoughts on that quote? Is it a good quote or am I just thinking too much?
2007-09-04 14:04:58 · 3 answers · asked by Lisa R 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
"I thought I was seeing stars but I was seeing dust." ~~Lisa R
I like it. The phrase has a ring to it. If I was your editor, I would change it slightly.
"I thought I was seeing stars, but it was only dust." ~~Lisa R
You should develop the thought a little further. Have you tried jotting ideas like this down in a notebook? It really helps with the writing process. Just as in a diary, write down the date before you begin scribbling. A week, a month, a year or 20 years from now, you will be fascinated by how far your writing has come. Good luck, I think you are onto a beginning!
2007-09-04 14:24:23 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds good
it 's saying to me dont set your goal to high but set the ones you can attain before seeking higher expectations
2007-09-04 14:10:47 · answer #2 · answered by bob 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thinkin too much
2007-09-04 14:09:10 · answer #3 · answered by Sophia 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋