It’s hard to find the right words,
To say what is in my heart
I don’t know where the end will lead,
But you are in the start
It all started when I saw you,
My heart it beat so fast
I knew deep down inside my soul,
That joyous moment it would last
Getting to know you only increased,
My hearts feelings of love
On a gloomy day of despair,
You shine like a morning dove
Your beauty is like a rose,
The second it begins to bloom
Your smile is luminescent,
Lighting up the darkest room
Your eyes are like stars,
Picked right from the night
They are like diamonds,
Shining O’ so bright
But the brightest thing about you,
It’s your personality
It is like my heart is a locked door,
And you are the key
And every time you laugh,
I swear an angel plays a note
The stunning sound which comes off that harp,
Cannot even be wrote
And now that you know my secret,
I am really beggin’
Would you like to spend some time with me?
I really love you, Megan
2007-09-03 04:37:42 · 17 answers · asked by Helloguy 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Cute - but if it is just the beginning of your relationship it is a little pushy. Hold onto it until you have been dating a year then give it to her - she will think it is so sweet you had so much love for her since the beginning - right now it just may end it. Good Luck!
2007-09-03 04:42:16 · answer #1 · answered by Walking on Sunshine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really pretty Megan sounds like one lucky girl. I love the way your really put alot of feeling into it to. I don't think Megan will say no to spending time with you either lol I wish you lot's of luck.
2007-09-03 11:43:45 · answer #2 · answered by ~~Just me~~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww!! she will love it!!!
she will know how sweet of a guy you are, if she doesnt already know. very nice. don't be afraid to show your feelings, but also dont come on too strong. I think this is right in the middle and perfect! Good Luck!
:)
2007-09-03 11:46:54 · answer #3 · answered by Taytay 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg! that is so good. i wish someone would write me a poem like that. id cry ]: thats really good. you must have some deep feelings for her. i think if you give her the poem shell deffinately want to spend time with you. i hope everything works out. goodluck! [:
2007-09-03 11:56:00 · answer #4 · answered by graciepooh1722 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummm, does Megan already like you? If not, this might be a little overwhelming to her just to "spend some time" together.
2007-09-03 11:42:07 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
forget about guys comments.. I think your poem is sweet and unique it really comes from the heart and clearly says what you feel about the girl, your girl will like it.
2007-09-03 11:44:59 · answer #6 · answered by aquila 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ohh, lord, thats kinda cheesy, i hope she likes corny poems :P
Sorry, For me, that dosent work, unless i really know the guy.
If you dont know her, dont risk it.
If you do kow her, why not try it.
She isnt me, she might end up liking it :)
2007-09-03 11:43:23 · answer #7 · answered by Brooklyn Zoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww!
That is like the sweetest poem ever..if i got something like that I would cry =]
It's perfect, really great job!!
2007-09-03 11:42:11 · answer #8 · answered by *mik 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet..
2007-09-03 11:41:39 · answer #9 · answered by Kaye Bennette 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww you're soo sweet i wish they were more guys like you . oh it's a very good poem . perfect well done!!!
2007-09-03 11:49:39 · answer #10 · answered by trini4life 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋