I Need Help!! Showing family home made movie!!!?
My mom wont let me show this video to everyone tomorrow, and i was thinking of presenting it before the big party. It's about my cat and she says it's "immature"... I still have time to edit it on microsoft movie maker but i don't see ANYTHING wrong with it!!! Whta can i do!?!? :/
It would be awesome if you could critque it pleas! :)
thank you :D
2007-09-01 21:01:19 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Health ➔ Mental Health
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qC8od_SfkI
2007-09-01 21:01:40 · update #1
No it's boring. Very boring. Yeah, you made a lot of nice titles and they spin and such, but that doesn't make a movie. The cat is not interesting.
You need to have a wider pan, something that is interesting and not repeat it over and over and have very few titles and numerous ways title are presented.
Here is what you really need to do... at the party tomorrow, take the video of the party. Take a lot of them. Then edit it down. Don't try to make a segment on each one so one relative won't feel left out, only include the parts that are good. Use titles where you can't hear what the person said. Use titles to present or setup a scene.
Then present it at the party next year or when the same people will be assembled. People like to see people they know. The family pet isn't that cool unless he/she is on TV every day.
BTW, your beginning titles are too long. They should be shortened.
Yeah, you sound stoned to me too.
2007-09-01 21:11:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i does not on purpose injury anyones thoughts, yet your mom is desirable. I see you place a lot of paintings into it, however the camara shifting is distracting and the sound does not help the two. Get a tripod or somebody else to video for you. Make a sparkling talk (what you will say.) The giggling and mumbling isn't humorous or remarkable. Say something like "right that is Trinity, He/She thinks I truly have thrown a cat toy down the stairs. enable's see if he/she does it againg." ... in line with threat a touch historic past track might help too. suited of success.
2016-10-03 12:29:15 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is funny, but a little slow moving. I don't really see what she is on about.
There are a few spelling errors, such as one when you have the word "too" instead of "to". Otherwise it's fine.
2007-09-01 21:10:28 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Terrible. You don't deserve to use the word "leet."
2007-09-01 21:07:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your mom is trying to protect you.
2007-09-01 22:00:00 · answer #5 · answered by Gray Wanderer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
were you high? It's not really funny
2007-09-01 21:07:44 · answer #6 · answered by anticarly2 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋