God?
shut up
You want God?
I'll show you god
I got your god swinging
but, peace
I love you
I wish you were smart
like me
but you believe in god?
shheessh
you must be crazy
to believe such lies
just open your head
if you were cool,
like me
we would agree,
with me.
Got it?
2007-08-30 15:48:21 · 29 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
I am beginning to understand that on Y/A, there has been no serious discussions about satire.
2007-08-30 15:59:32 · update #1
rofl
2007-08-30 15:51:05 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 13⤊ 1⤋
a real 8 track poem. Wow. I'm impressed. You sure do have God on the mind. The way you slid the intelligence thing and the "coolness" factor just made everything come together. In fact, I think you should publish it. Got anymore?
2007-08-30 15:53:02 · answer #2 · answered by Somewhat Enlightened, the Parrot of Truth 7 · 6⤊ 0⤋
why do Atheists spend so much time asking questions in the Religion section?
You sound like a lost soul reaching out for help. Read the Bible, open your heart and let the Holy Spirit in you. You can reject it all you want, but if it's God's will it is going to happen.
Sorry you're so lost and miserable.
2007-08-30 15:54:21 · answer #3 · answered by Toolman 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I think atheists in general wants to be called intellectuals and rational human beings. It's more about ego. I hope they'd just shut up and leave Christians alone.
And as of the poem, well it's not even a poem.
2007-08-30 15:57:17 · answer #4 · answered by mcw 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It's okay, but you might want to take a class in creative writing or grammar. It's pretty weak. I can't focus on your message because your prose is so poor, your grammar stinks and the sentence structure is a joke .....sorry!
2007-08-30 15:55:23 · answer #5 · answered by Native Spirit 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Sweet Pea it is nice that you mention God so many times. It must mean deep in side you are a true believer. you don't write poems about God's you don't glorify, so it is obvious he is you God. He loves you just let him do a wonder in you life. God Bless!
2007-08-30 15:53:34 · answer #6 · answered by b n real 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
wow. you're really into poetry tonight...
o.k. here's a love poem to think about.
i have known you always
many lives ago we loved
before we met
i saw your smile in dreams
and my soul remembered
bright blessings to you
edit
actually contrary to what some are saying it is a poem, and poetry can be as self centered as anything else.
2007-08-30 15:56:49 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
hey.. Nice poem but tooooo bad I believe in god.. I think u should start writing other poems.. It will be great because you got the talent.
2007-08-30 15:55:42 · answer #8 · answered by Hottie Pro 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Horrible.
2007-08-30 15:52:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
Robert Smith isn't cool. There, I said it.
:p
2007-08-30 16:02:25 · answer #10 · answered by Darth Cheney 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
That's good but mine's better:
I'm an atheist,
get over it.
I'm an atheist,
GET OVER IT!
You're a theist,
leave me alone.
You're a theist,
LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
2007-08-30 16:30:16 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋