2007-08-30 15:07:06 · 10 answers · asked by knswalker 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Too vague. What's difficult about it? What "times"? Single household? Mother? Father? Grandmother? Growing up? What ages? Teens? Toddler? Young girl? Be more specific. More defined.
2007-08-30 15:14:13 · answer #1 · answered by Max 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A thesis statement should give a clear idea of what the reader is to expect from the paper. It presents your argument... You are indeed stating a fact, but it isn't meaty enough for a thesis sentence...
It should also point to the reason that you are writing the essay. "In this author's experience, growing up..." or "Research shows that..."
Your sentence has a great idea, but it is weakened by the "at time" at the end. You can drop it and change "is" to "can be" and get a stronger sentence.
Good luck
2007-08-30 15:15:10 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not sure how old you are? Or what grade level you have to write this for, but if it's for college...it's a little too simple. Your thesis statement should be stronge and capture the readers attention. It's a good sentence, but maybe more a high school paper. Just my opinion. I graduated from Domingues Hills, in Carson...
2007-08-30 15:28:08 · answer #3 · answered by driven_tolove 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um, the writing? u could elaborate and make a fuller use of language like
Growing up in a single-parent household can cause difficulties for certain occasions. but yes, it is.
2007-08-30 15:13:13 · answer #4 · answered by kenyadigthemusic? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could make it more positive by saying something like, "Coping with the difficulties of a one-parent household".
2007-08-30 15:14:22 · answer #5 · answered by Stumpy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes. Do you mean single parent household though?
2007-08-30 15:09:43 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your thesis statement should contain your arguments too.
2007-08-30 15:11:13 · answer #7 · answered by Megegie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, it's too vague. who is it difficult for? WHY is it difficult? you need to include that all in your thesis statement, and go into detail about them in the body paragraphs.
2007-08-30 15:14:44 · answer #8 · answered by toby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good. and make that correction.
2007-08-30 15:10:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hell no its awsom
2007-08-30 15:10:33 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋