DOOM
Here words are meaningless,
here all that lives are guns.
Why Speak when you can gain more from killing?
Why think when our minds could be as simple as evil?
Why Stand and absorb earthly beauties,
When destruction of these wonderlands,
Earn so much more power?
Why Live with your emotions?
So many to trap you,
Into a suicidal abyss.
Destroy them all and live forever!
Live in the mind of Doom.
So Close your Eyes,
Live this meaningless bliss in your head.
Murder! Mayhem! Magic!
Open your eyes,
And It lays in front of you.
2007-08-27 15:19:00 · 13 answers · asked by . 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
MY Dear, I do believe you are living
on the "DARK SIDE"
YOU need to come out into the lite.*
2007-08-27 15:24:51 · answer #1 · answered by Kerilyn 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good actually...but is that the way you WANT your world to be? Be careful where you focus attention you may not like where it leads with such dark visuals.
2007-08-27 23:23:10 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is wonderful. you are very talented. the imagery was great, but in some places it didn't flow very well. the ending could use something, maybe a little more solidarity, but overall, a great poem.
2007-08-27 22:58:45 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it! Its so right. It has so much meaning and it really is true in the world we're living in. Sure it's gloomy and dark but so is the world.
2007-08-27 22:29:02 · answer #4 · answered by jessecalydie 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You are seriously being deceived . You are heading down a road of dist ruction. There is no reward in darkness
2007-08-27 22:29:03 · answer #5 · answered by ckrug 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
it's very dark.... depressing, not my cup of tea usually... but i like it! it's way cool! I especially like the last part... 'close your eyes' then 'open your eyes, and it lays in front of you' its way awesome!
2007-08-27 22:25:17 · answer #6 · answered by fairyprincess 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you wrote it from pain in your heart how you fill about life. yes thats how poems are wrote up.Good **
2007-08-27 22:29:46 · answer #7 · answered by jackie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
let the critics makes you to produce a greater poem
2007-08-27 22:29:03 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
What a cheerful discourse !
2007-08-27 22:25:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice poem...i've never been a fan of doom. i prefer rpgs.
2007-08-27 22:27:15 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋