so i wrot this tell me if you like it.
If I could change I would
Just for a day if I could.
It feels so strange
I look so deranged
But just showing my love
If only I could
If I could change I would
Just for a day if I could. .
You should have understood
But u didn’t take my love like u should
If I could change I would
Just for a day if I could. .
If only I read your mind
Then maybe you would be mine
But things always change
You’re just out of my range
Just let me write another page
Here I stand again engaged
Don’t know what to do or what to say
All I can do is pray!
But baby I don't have all day...
Here I am standing outside your door
I didn’t know what to tell you
Staring at the floor
I didn’t know what to say
You lead me astray...
And my thoughts and feelings,
Were liked faded lines.
Looking in your eyes it showed me I’ll be fine
All when I saw you standing there
All it took was one glare
Love was there!
how is it please tell me!!
2007-08-27 05:47:01 · 7 answers · asked by <3...lessthanperfect...</3 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Well written from your heart and shows your love from inside your deep soul
2007-09-04 03:58:12 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! I think it's honest because everyone has been there, I know I have. There is something to be said about getting your heart broken, seems like people are the most creative when they have experienced some sort of hurt. Also, sometimes it makes things a little easier to cope with, ya know seeing it laid out in front of you. I say keep up the good work.
2007-09-04 05:46:20 · answer #2 · answered by Sweetie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your talented. the only thing i didn't like about it was how you said if i could change. for just a day i would like three times. other than that it was really good.
2007-09-03 14:44:10 · answer #3 · answered by angela 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was great darlin. im with you. you are good at expressing yourself. pull it together darlin. you are, and you will be, ok, i promise you. allow yourself to move forward, and smile for what is in store for you to come. it will be better than you can imagine. im here if you need me.
2007-09-03 19:17:34 · answer #4 · answered by Jack 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very good. sounds like you should be writing songs.
2007-09-04 05:41:35 · answer #5 · answered by heather m 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE IT !! except its kinda long
2007-09-04 05:45:24 · answer #6 · answered by % 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HORRIBLE MAKE IT MORE just kidding it wasz ok
2007-08-27 06:04:02 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋