My time, my keyboard,
my time, my fingers,
he is alone, in war
I miss the Dad I adore.
Sand and heat and him
his postcard is on my wall,
times, he does not talk,
times, I know he stands tall.
Prayers never left me, ever,
hopes and dreams are with me,
Daddy is my hero, my Manly Man,
He knows that and grinning again."
God Bless all our soldiers and sailors.
2007-08-26 12:13:49 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Politics & Government ➔ Military
Melody, Thank you, yes, of course.
2007-08-26 12:28:37 · update #1
Thank you Mrs C.
2007-08-26 12:37:41 · update #2
SSG (Seargent) Thank you.
I been crying a bit. I like writing poems haow I feel.
2007-08-26 13:04:14 · update #3
Very nice. I am sure that your dad is proud of you!
God Bless America
Land of the Free
Because of the Brave!!
Both you and your dad qualify!!
2007-08-26 12:22:29 · answer #1 · answered by fire4511 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, I almost started to cry when I read that. You are very good at poetry.
Be very proud of your Dad, he is in my prayers as well. My son was in Iraq, USMC for almost a year. Thankfully he came home with no harm done to him. I prayed day and night for his safe return.
God bless our troops....
2007-08-26 12:22:29 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
That is a great poem. You should send it to your dad. He would like to read that. I enjoyed reading letters from friends when I was deplyoed, but reading that from you will make his time over there a lot better.
2007-08-26 12:21:03 · answer #3 · answered by Just Trying 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That's beautiful:) It's been a while since I read any positive poems relating to miltary in a war......most of the ones I've read are depressing:(
2007-08-26 12:18:26 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I liked that very much. I hope you don't mind I would like to share it with my 8 year old daughter whose daddy is serving too.
2007-08-26 12:22:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I love your poem. Keep your head up and keep writing. Your creative words will be a gift to others.
2007-08-29 17:27:01 · answer #6 · answered by My Brother 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YEAH!!! *standing ovation* I like that and you should be proud of your dad, hopefully, it won't be long and he'll be home with you.
God bless all our military members overseas and at home.
2007-08-26 12:21:20 · answer #7 · answered by Yankee Micmac 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
From a dad in the sand.
that was a very good.
2007-08-26 12:50:44 · answer #8 · answered by SSGAllan 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Very good job!
2007-08-27 03:03:42 · answer #9 · answered by Critter 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i liked that. from the heart
2007-08-26 12:18:14 · answer #10 · answered by richfraga 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋