How are these lyrics?

Question

http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writing/24464-no-title-yet-thanks.html

Yay!

Thank you. This is actually my first whole song I've written, and my first lyrics for a song ever, so it means a lot to me!! :)

Answer 1

They're pretty standard, not especially poetic, but they're not terrible. I think if you keep working you could be a good lyricist!

Answer 2

good