Power Ranger fans: Any idea for a fanfic about Tommy dying in Kimberly's arms after having forgiven her?

Question

I have some bits and pieves of ideas but it's hard to piece it together. Years after the break-up--Tommy calls Kimberly and says he's ready to talk it over with her. Kim agrees, and they talk it over. Kimberly asks Tommy's forgiveness for cheating on him with another guy. Tommy forgives her and asks her forgiveness for dating Katherine. They find closure. Hours later, they find themselves in the old command center with Zordon ressurected. The other Rangers are there--from Jason, Billy, Zack, and Trini to Adam, Rocky, Aisha, Tanya, Justin, and Kat. Jason asks what it's all about, and Zordon says something about a prophecy about Tommy fighting his last battle with Goldar. Their power coins, weapons and Zords are reforged, and the other Rangers are to be the backup. But Tommy must fight this battle alone. Moments later, Tommy dies in Kimberly's arms. All this happens in one day.

So, anyone liked the idea? Any suggestions/improvements?

Tommy is victorious over Goldar, but he dies due to a fatal blow in the gut.

Answer 1

omfg that mde me want to cry so sad sounds good but it hink that kim should die in hsi arms but she liek jumoed in the way of zordans blast and zordon went away sounds so good

Answer 2

lol, guy that's bringing lower back thoughts! i might say Tommy and Kimberly. even however they the two have been great cheesy and overly delicate, Tommy and Kimberly could have been jointly forever! My 9 12 months previous nephew could be proud that i understand those potential Rangers trivialities. lol. massive call for you for being a classic potential Ranger fan and happy with it too!

Answer 3

That is so unbelieveable I an scarcely reading that. How can that happen since Tommy became Dr. Thomas Oliver in Dino Thunder, I am so glad that is only a fan-fic, I am very interested in finding out how you plan this one.