My daughter wrote this, I would love comments. Please.?
Inside Army
Sometimes I wonder
If the battle is worth fighting
If I should give into the monster
The monster inside me, eating
Trying to swallow me whole
I try to stop it
Before it engolfs my soul
Or should I let it
I am a one man army
All alone to battle
A vicious thing inside me
Am I worth the rattle
I feel like giving up
For I am truly alone
I try to reach out
But nobody is home
I thought you were there for me
To help me fight my battle
Even you gave up on me
And now I feel so little
Once more on my own
To capture the creature inside me
The one that has only grown
Since you left my inside army
I wonder why I bother
Why I keep on going
I wish that I could smother
Myself and just stop living
Then I would just surrender
Myself to whats inside me
The beast would be the victor
And beat my inside army
2007-08-16
07:31:08
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Sapere Aude
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Yes, she is depressed. We are helping her with that. This was written during that stage.
She is 17.
2007-08-16
07:37:47 ·
update #1