Am I the One?
I cant sleep
I cant eat
thoughts flow
'round me viscously........
try to breath
taken it slow
my love for you
you'll never kmow.........
you keep me up
you let me down
out of my mind
you're not around..........
a final word
one final kiss
am I the one
you're going to miss?
2007-08-14 16:56:14 · 13 answers · asked by ? 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Tan muy hermoso…Bondioli...Gracias mi amigo, Shad @)~>~
2007-08-15 06:10:09 · update #1
I miss you already and you're not even gone!
2007-08-15 03:25:14 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
HEY Shad
i think that poem was fabulous and even though Salene is sweet to say its perfect as it is nothing is perfect and there is always room for improvment! Even though its fabulous no harm in making it spectacularly fab! Anyway just a suggestion your the poet not me! Good night, keep writting!
2007-08-15 01:35:57 · answer #2 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No conocia quien es usted
va a presionarme
con sus gritas
El sol levantaba
en el mismo lugar
jamas voy a
juntarme
con la llorona
2007-08-15 02:22:10 · answer #3 · answered by bondioli22 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like this poem it talks about
romance, missing someone
but it about unable to sleep
and eating.
I can see these things happening
this is because unable to concentrate
because missing someone
2007-08-15 10:03:03 · answer #4 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow this is beautiful. I like it, in some ways it really does just say what we all are trying or wanting to say sometimes.
sounds wonderful and even flows pretty!!
2007-08-15 11:03:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hardly , one teacher learn from 40 students but 40 students only learn from one teacher.
2007-08-15 03:02:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem!
2007-08-22 18:52:38 · answer #7 · answered by †Evonne† 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The agony of unrequited love.....it's beautifuly painful.....isn't it shad..........however the world is more endearing because of it's present...
2007-08-16 04:43:30 · answer #8 · answered by soundfamiliar 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice poem..very touching..but im married ad probably to old for you...beam me up scottie
2007-08-15 00:35:57 · answer #9 · answered by eb_guy 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This is a beautiful poem. I think that it couldn't be witten any better. Thanks for sharing this with us.
2007-08-15 00:23:05 · answer #10 · answered by Argent 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋