This is one of my favorite shots, but it is a slide that has faded over the years. The original was taken in 1981 or 1982 on Ektachrome while hanging out of an airplane door at about 1,200-1,500 feet up. Maybe it was 3,000 feet... I can't recall.
I have had an 8x10 version on display in my office for 25 years and it has finally faded to muted shades of brown, so I want to reprint the picture.
I have made one stab at editting for balance between light and dark levels and pumped up the contrast and saturation a little bit. I added some orange in the blown out highlight of the sun reflection on the river. I applied 50% unsharp mask.
What would YOU do if this was your shot?
See the original and also Edit No. 1 at this link:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/samfeinstein/tags/cohansey/
2007-08-10
17:49:21
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Antoni, I hear you, but read on...
Kitty, the point is to see if we can collectively some up with some ideas here as a learning exercise.
2007-08-10
20:32:48 ·
update #1
Seamless, see above: "This is one of my favorite shots, but it is a slide that has faded over the years. The original was taken in 1981 or 1982 on Ektachrome..." If I could start with a better scan, I would, so I really appreciate your efforts. If I had a time machine (which is one of my frequent recommendations), I'd go back and use a haze filter. This was one fo 3 shots I took "to get the film out of the camera" before I reloaded with Plus-X to shoot some skydivers for the newspaper. My main subject would not present a problem with haze, so I was not equipped for it. [continued]
2007-08-11
07:55:59 ·
update #2
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I'll take your answer and go through this process myself as it is a great lesson in Photoshop. As far as your rendering, I know that you have no memory of the scene and you didn't discuss it with me, but you have preserved the fine detail of the highest clouds and I like the depth of the ground colors. You lost the yellow of the sunset along the right horizon, though. I'd darken this just so the viewer isn't drawn to the whiteness of that area. Thank you for spending the time and contributing to my education.
2007-08-11
07:56:16 ·
update #3
Vance - I definitely like the winding river better in edit #2 and certain things about the sky, but #1 looks more true to nature overall. Time machine... I need one to take the shot over or at least scan the slide when it was new. You need one to allow for 26 hours today instead of the usual 24. :-)
Nurse_in_Ky - The lower 40-50% of your edit looks god and then the top half is pretty much lost. I know you didn't set yourself up for this, but a group of us have decided that it is good to simply be HONEST with each other instead of saying how wonderful everything looks. It's a learning process. I hope you are not upset. I do appreciate your result, though, as I can see what is possible for the foreground. In my edit #1, I used a couple of adjustment layers so I could preserve the detail in the areas where yours is now washed out.
2007-08-11
12:27:05 ·
update #4