im not good at poems..i want it to rhyme tho...she was my gf but things didnt work out and now everythin is falling downhill. she doesnt want me in here life not even as friends. i want to rite a poem tellin her that i wont be in her life but ill miss her. i respect her for her feelings and if its what will make her happy. ill do it.
ive really tried to come up with one but ive either used a line from a song or the thing didnt rhyme. maybe everyone can jus give me one line and ill put it together?
2007-08-10 11:13:16 · 5 answers · asked by lax T studd 18 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I'm sorry if I hurt you
I really didn't mean to
I would love us to stay friends
from this day till the end
I know you don't want me around
but you'll always know where I can be found
Just incase one day you find
That you have indeed changed your mind
You'll always be in my heart
2007-08-17 20:15:53 · answer #1 · answered by shygirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a poem i wrote to my daughter who is 24
To Nicole~
How to Make a Beautiful Life
Love yourself,
Make peace with who you are
And where you are
At this moment in time.
Listen to your heart.
If you can't hear what it is saying
In this noisy world,
Make Time for yourself.
Enjoy your own company.
Let your mind wander among the stars.
Try.
Take Chances.
Make Mistakes.
Life can be messy
And confusing at times,
But it's also full of surprises.
The next rock in your path might be a stepping-stone.
Be Happy.
When you don't have what you want
Want what you have.
Make Do.
That's a well kept secret of contentment.
There aren't any shortcuts to tomorrow.
You have to make your own way
To know where you are going,
Is only part of it.
You need to know where you've been too.
And if you ever get lost, don't worry.
The people who love you will find you.
Count on it!
Life isn't days and years.
It's what you do with time
And with all the goodness and grace
That;s inside you
MAKE A BEAUTIFUL LIFE.....
The kind that you deserve.
I Love You.
With unconditional Love,
Mom Feb 2006
2007-08-18 02:45:41 · answer #2 · answered by DeeDee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is not any longer as complicated as you think of to jot down a poem. yet once you desire it to truly talk your coronary heart and for her to take it heavily, do no longer make IT RHYME! it is the worst and maximum superficial poetic device. the biggest trick to writing reliable poetry is powerful, wonderful verbs (strikes) and actually particular information. i'd start up by using writing down words that describe her and what you enjoyed approximately her..or you are able to try describing each ingredient of a undeniable 2nd you 2 shared (use all your senses!) and how it makes you sense to renowned that may not in any respect take place returned.
2016-10-09 23:09:04 · answer #3 · answered by bhuwan 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I want to be there for you
i wish you would want me there too
im hoping we will be good friends
all the way till the end
think about it my dear friend
2007-08-18 10:18:10 · answer #4 · answered by XxnikkirosexX 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Check this out ... I read it earlier today.
2007-08-10 11:23:55 · answer #5 · answered by Giggly Giraffe 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋