i made this poem for him!????

Question

what do u think of this im only 13 but i tried really hard........

I have tried to get over you for so long because of all the pain this love has caused, I tried and tried again and again to think of reasons to forget about you..... but it's hard for my reasons are very few. I fall asleep thinking about you wondering why this love still hasnt came to an end when all that comes to mind is you only think of me as a friend. You have opened a part of my heart that I never knew was there! can't you feel the chemistry of love in the air? I hope one day my dreams about you will somehow one day come true.................

I know its not that great but i only spent about 15 minutes writing it and I wrote it to my crush that I have like for a year!
wut do u think of it??

Answer 1

i think its really sweet....u should write more just for ur own sake..

Answer 2

I think it's a great poem really. i love writing poems myself im 19. yea it tells him how u feel? and if he feels the same way. It also says that u have opened ur heart to him and u never did that for a boy i think the poem is awesome u should give it to him to let him no how u feel? who knows maybe he will be ur future hubby it's possible. Don't keep waiting give the poem to the boy cuz if u don't ur gonna regret it and u look back a couple years thinking i should of told him how i feel and now he will never get the chance to know. Follow ur heart girl if u need any advice yahoo message me at Shortcake0019 kk bye good luck

Answer 3

I think its cute, full of lots of romantic pitfalls, and navie innocents... oooo to be young again!!! If he doesn't like it leave the hateful bastard!