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There is no such thing as a perfect woman, nor a perfect man. Only an understanding man could make a woman become his perfect woman, and vice versa.

2007-08-07 09:57:18 · 7 answers · asked by Hermes 2 in Education & Reference Quotations

7 answers

grammar? perfecto
but ya flow is off
understanding is not the right word here

2007-08-07 12:47:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

The grammer is good, but the second sentence does not flow very well. You might want to change it

2007-08-07 17:27:39 · answer #2 · answered by Penny 3 · 0 0

Grammatically fine but second sentence is very unclear.

2007-08-07 17:05:35 · answer #3 · answered by svengteach 4 · 0 0

excellent grammar and sentiment expressed.

2007-08-07 17:06:16 · answer #4 · answered by wendy_da_goodlil_witch 7 · 0 0

I would exchange "or" for "nor" in the first sentence.

The rest is fine

2007-08-07 18:25:46 · answer #5 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0 1

Yep.

2007-08-07 17:01:17 · answer #6 · answered by catpouncing 4 · 0 0

IT IS CORRECT.....BUT AN ODD CHOICE CONSIDERING THE CONTEXT.....POSSIBLE ALTERNATIVES COULD INCLUDE--WISE--LOVING--THOUGHTFUL--SELFLESS ETC.

2007-08-07 17:07:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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