outside her castle. There she saw four kittens in front of her feet! She was so happy she ran inside to tell Laura, the queen about the kittens!
Laura grabbed a box and McKenzie but the kittens inside! “Mew” “mew” they shouted!
They were hungry. McKenzie the beautiful princess, grabbed some royal hot dogs to feed them by the time she was back all the kitties were asleep!
The queen said, “YUCK get those kittens out of my house they are wet and dirty!”
“FINE!” said McKenzie! She put the box out in the rain.
“LAURA, LAURA!” the princess squealed! The mother cat is here!
“Good they have one I thought the mother might have died good thing she’s back!”*** Laura said with a snobby voice!
“What is she doing?” Said McKenzie. Laura replied, “She’s feeding them.”
“Oh.”
McKenzie and Laura went up to there rooms and fell asleep. The next Morning the kittens were GONE! McKenzie was so sad she yelled “KITTIES! WHERE ARE YOU?”
All the Kittens ran up to her and were meowing like crazy they remembered her!
McKenzie wanted to scream she was so happy! However, she did not that would be “princess like!
The next morning The Kittens greeted her, the next day, and the next day.
Until one afternoon All four kittens where asleep on the princess porch but he heard a mew noise it was coming from the tornado shelter!
She ran to the shelter her Best friend Madison opened the shelter and saw a little kitten stuck inside! McKenzie ran to tell her mom! Laura quickly jumped into the shelter and grabbed the kitten. The kitten was saved!
The next morning McKenzie and her mother went outside to play with the kittens.OH NO the EVIL LANDLORD came and took the queens money for rent and said, “YUCK KITTENS! I will be right back to get a bucket I am going to eat them MUHAHAHAHA!”The EVIL LANDLORD ran to get a bucket but McKenzie was so mad she grabbed a kitten and took it inside! She whispered in the kittens ear “NO ONE EATS MY KITTEN!”
All the kittens where captured and eaten by the evil landlord but the one kitten was safe
THE
END!!!
2007-08-05 08:42:13 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pets ➔ Cats
Dont worry i want send my pic to that creep
2007-08-05 08:56:25 · update #1
cool ru in 6 th grade thats a very cool story well im 12 and i still enjoy it great story!
2007-08-05 08:47:40 · answer #1 · answered by jennifer 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Such a sad ending for the kittens. This just goes to show, things do not always have a happy ending. Great job writing your story, and I enjoyed reading it and found it entertaining . I think you should keep writing stories.
Sparkles
2007-08-05 15:46:24 · answer #2 · answered by Sparkles 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Whatever you do don't send a picture of yourself to "Jeff Hardy" nor to anyone else online, nor believe for a second that he is 11. But do keep writing.
2007-08-05 15:52:31 · answer #3 · answered by RE 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
story was pretty good. MY age is close to yours.
by the way the person who said they were also 11 and asked for your pic could be lying so do not give them your pic.
2007-08-05 15:51:23 · answer #4 · answered by you wish you knew! 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
this is nmore like a 6 years old story.
how did youget on my 11 year old can't get on said had to be 13
where's the question this isn't about cats just a free analysis of your bad writing
2007-08-05 16:12:19 · answer #5 · answered by Kit_kat 7 · 0⤊ 3⤋
It's okay. You overuse the use of capitals & exclamation marks. Exclamation marks are meant to stress particular things, so if there are loads of them then it ruins the point.
2007-08-05 15:46:44 · answer #6 · answered by CatE 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Cute story,too bad they got eaten though!!!!
2007-08-05 15:49:43 · answer #7 · answered by Artemis 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋