2007-08-04 16:43:55 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Those that will accept me for who I am.
2007-08-04 16:46:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
"people who will accept me for who I am?" The word those is redundant, you are a person not a thing, thus "who" and the i needs capitalization. Question mark should be inside quote marks too.
2007-08-04 16:52:34 · answer #2 · answered by reasonfaith 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Those people who will accept me for what I am.
2007-08-04 16:50:34 · answer #3 · answered by YankeeBelle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well, it is hard for those people to accepted you. it has to be
any socaol, home, marriage or outside of the group. i dont
really feel that much accepted because i am esplisy and the
dumb people dont know what it is. it is hard for anyone to
be accepted it try to be socilal and my mom know that. but when you have dad that don t belived it it can messy
2007-08-04 17:12:20 · answer #4 · answered by linda t 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Those people will accept me for what I am.
2007-08-04 16:48:12 · answer #5 · answered by What? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not really a mistake, it's just a matter of style.
The minor problem is redundancy, or wordiness.
you don't need "those people who"
you can say:
those who will...
or
people who will
And, you don't even need to put "will"
"Wordy" style is like writing:
The reason is because of the fact that......
2007-08-04 16:53:38 · answer #6 · answered by topink 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Capitalize "I". Otherwise it is correct.
2007-08-04 16:47:37 · answer #7 · answered by notyou311 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds pretty correct as it is.
2007-08-04 16:52:58 · answer #8 · answered by naked snake 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋