this is my second writing so im not than good, i wanna know ur opinions about it. thanks
I am a star in the sky
You will never reach me so don’t even try
Don’t bother and send any kiss or hug I am too high
I am always up there, right there
I am too shiny so don’t hurt you eyes
Your staring to me is useless, so don’t beak your neck, you will never get me
My heart is only for one…..Oops, sorry it is not you
" if u need to say anything or ask me anything about it so i can improve my writing please contact me on : missitalian_9@yahoo.com
2007-08-03 17:01:47 · 3 answers · asked by alex atec 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I really like it. I can relate to you.
2007-08-03 17:08:43 · answer #1 · answered by dallaslibra 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad at all.You have talent and one day with some luck you will make it. Keep going and write as much as you can.The best, for you.
2007-08-04 00:07:25 · answer #2 · answered by Mario Vinny D 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was okay but don't gas your head up though, because with that attitude you'll end up alone, with nobody phone.....
2007-08-04 00:08:06 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋