A LETTER TO HEAVEN....
I still remember da first day of our love...The day wen we promised to b there 4 eachother through all da seasons of life but braking da promise u went away far away frm my world widout turning around 2 bed gud bye.....time passes by but memories still remains da same,carring wid dem all da hurts n pains thoughts of u fill my eyes wid tears..And heart wid pain ur memories, i wish it whould fade away but again i wish 2 c u someday.....i never thought i'd one day b crying wid da feeling of never ending pain...y god did dis 2 me?i dnt knw.....He does gud 4 all is all i knw........
its my own poem.....my feelings....my pain....my words....
how z it?wat u think abt dis frndz......give me a gud opinion abt it.....pls....
thanx 4 ur answers....:-)
@--}-- hez a red rose 4 u all.....bye...
2007-08-02 11:29:30 · 7 answers · asked by Sana 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
hello MY DEAR FRIEND!!!!,
hey , its all of my feelings too... how is it possible? we too have a same type of feelings too. i do no how to express, but u did it.. its great yaar!!!!! ALL THE VERY BEST FOR UR FUTURE. u will surely win. u even have a chance to become a poet.
ok..
bye, my dear friend..........
2007-08-03 05:07:06 · answer #1 · answered by Fathima 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like ur poem,wid full of feeling,pain nd emotion.Is this happen 2 u.Nd thanx 4 rose.
2007-08-03 02:47:25 · answer #2 · answered by SmArTy SeHeR cHaNd 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good. Well i beleive this is from ur deep heart. I know ur suffering. Nice poem and more a sad end for love story. Hope he will be back soon - Insha allah
2007-08-03 01:27:26 · answer #3 · answered by asif 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well.. honestly, and I mean it in a contrutive criticism way. You should try writing poems with appropriate spelling. Seriously. The way you just wrote messes up the meaning and makes people not to want to read it!
Just my opnion!
2007-08-02 18:53:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
WOW! u can write poems its beautiful it sounds fantastic its really good its soo gud i cant find words to describe it but u can really write
thx for the rose ur poems WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-08-02 18:42:07 · answer #5 · answered by !urbeauty! 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
full of emotions......i like that....is it really happen to u.??
2007-08-03 00:55:15 · answer #6 · answered by shaktimaan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice one ...It's simple but powerful................
2007-08-03 09:06:37 · answer #7 · answered by Bubbles 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋