How can I properly & powerfully persuade the people @ my school to loan me $4,000?

Question

There's a program @ my university where they give a MEMORIAL Loan to students who are in financial need & are receiving financial aid, & the money is deducted from my refund checks. But they told me that if I am in DIRE need, I have to write them a letter of being in extenuating circumstances, so I can get the money earlier. I'm on a fixed income, my electricity bill is high because I had to pay a deposit on it, & I'm low on food & clothing, & I need books & school supplies. & this type of loan is NOT credit-based. My financial credit is poor as a result of Hurricane Katrina (long story) but I became in debt, trying to replace my necessities.

I only have 3 towels & washcloths left. I didn't realize my brother was stealing my stuff when I was living with him. Now I have my own apartment.

I'm asking in the ETIQUETTE section since this has to do with trying to persuade politely & properly & not rudely.

Answer 1

When I read only the beginning of your question, I
thought I was going to tell you that what's stopping everyone from asking for $4000? But as I read on, you really have a brutal story. Maybe you could post just what you wrote in your question. I would gladly lend you money. You've had a rough time of it. Good luck to you. :)

Answer 2

Dear Question Queen,

Here are a few options I can think of to night. I am including a link to a page with information about the etiquette of letter writing - http://www.bartleby.com/95/28.html -

Make sure that when you write your letter, that you explain your circumstances, clearly and with a touch of emotion. Try to understand HOW they will receive the letter ... think of all the questions they may have. Be prepared for a no, and already be working on the rebuttal to the no.

Then look into the other forms of help available. That is what they are there for.

good luck,
green terra

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Hold on to what you believe even if it is a tree which stands by itself.
Hold on to what you must do even if it is a long way from here.
Hold on to life even when it is easier letting go.
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Answer 3

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Answer 4

Well, if you put all of that in your letter, you've got one heck of a letter to take into Uni.... Also tell them what they will get from lending you the money....ie... a student who will complete the course, studuous, conscientious who will make a fabulous contribution to society when completed. Good luck, you deserve it.

Answer 5

I think it would be OK if you just tell them what you told us. Just use a business letter format when you write it. Good luck!