Really, I'm despirate. Would anyone care to take a listen and tell me what you think?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MeeCXycUW9c
(the link to the song I am currently working on)
http://www.myspace.com/mawkishjazz
(the link to a couple of other songs I have uploaded)
I really appreciate your help.
2007-08-01 02:18:56 · 10 answers · asked by Mawkish 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Singing
As soon as I saw your band name - I get it. This is a spoof. It is SO VERY BAD, it could not be anything else. I have multiple degrees from fine conservatories, and have been full-time employed in music since 1971 - never worked in any other field, never had to have a *day job* - this IS my career - and I judge music competitions in NY.
On to the details - TUNE THE DAMN GUITAR! You have NO sense of chord progression. You do not sing in tune (soloist) - and the Echoing Neanderthal is just making me bite my lip ( in a bad way . . .). The melody is uneventful - and the lyrics must have been outsourced to a clinically depressed 12-year old (I should know - I *teach* depressed 12 year olds . . . ). The credits at the end were a hoot - all the people who wrote sincere things to you need need to look up the word *mawkish* in a dictionary.
So - if this was a spoof, you have pulled it off! If this was a genuine attempt at music composition - then you have a great future ahead of you - working at Sears.
2007-08-01 12:53:55 · answer #1 · answered by Mamianka 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey man if your a begginer muscian id say thats pretty damn good. I like spoil the vote, it is different like others have said but its kinda catchy. Making your own music and songs isnt easy so I give you a thumbs up!!! Like i said if your just a beginner maybe with the right help it could go further. haha everyone should look at the myspace info "unsigned because the music sucks" that gave me a good laugh. At least you know where your at and can accept critisizm. good luck :)
2007-08-01 09:33:28 · answer #2 · answered by theboss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay. I am in no way trying to hurt you. So, you guys scare me. If i played that on halloween i would have to beg people to come to the door and also get the award for the least visited house during halloween. They are scary and something I don't really care for.
2007-08-01 09:59:44 · answer #3 · answered by nickthegeek15 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Other than the concept, the lyrics, the singing, the playing and the recording, it's OK...
In general, it's just as good as your spelling and grammatical sense.
2007-08-01 09:29:42 · answer #4 · answered by Aleph Null 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think they're both weird but some people will say the opposite just to make you feel better so sorry the truth hurts. of the 2 the 1st one's better.
2007-08-01 09:23:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like spoil the vote [:
but idt you have the option so pepople can add it to their muyspaces
2007-08-01 09:23:55 · answer #6 · answered by ohhlaalaa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was OK for me..1 thumb up ;-p
2007-08-01 12:43:02 · answer #7 · answered by churva 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" Spoil the vote ", wasn't bad.
2007-08-01 09:51:10 · answer #8 · answered by elliebear 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright but no offense dont quit your day job.
2007-08-01 09:23:19 · answer #9 · answered by Tom B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's alright but deep inside i know you will never kick *** as much as AFI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-08-01 09:23:55 · answer #10 · answered by N² 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋