Is this a good thank you note for an interview?

Question

Dear ____:

Thank you for seeing me this afternoon. It was a pleasure interviewing with you. I look forward to hearing from you regarding the office assistant position.l I have worked in small offices before and would welcome the opportunity to do so again. Thank you for your time and attention.

Sincerely,

Answer 1

Remind them of something positive about your interview, your background, or the company. Good otherwise.

Answer 2

I think its great and to the point. However, if you really felt a connection with hr person or with the company -- try to include how it fits you, or what you like about it, or how your skills can help the company, etc...some comment or paragraph explaining a more personal connection to the company.
Good Luck -- I'm still learning about this too, hope this helps.

Check online for some 'Thank You Letters after Interview' sample letters.

Answer 3

Let them know how interested you are in this position and go into a little more detail about what intrigued or caught your attention during the interview.

Answer 4

Change the ending to something like this: My skills and experience working in offices such as yours would minimize your training time and expense. I welcome the opportunity to show you what I can do. Again, thank you for your time and attention.

Answer 5

I think so, its short, simple, polite and straight to the point!