Have u ever wished upon a star
For the man that lives so very far
For the one wish u hope comes true
were u meet him and he meets you
Have u ever dreamed and it came true
To have him only loving you
U give the world and all ur might
To hold ur dreams throughout the night
Have u ever wished u not awake
To find ur dreams are just a fake
Blowing candles on a cake
Dreaming of a wish u need to make
2007-07-27 17:01:45 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Its wonderful!!!Just look over it more and it could be recognized!!!Just lovely!!You show a great deal of passion in your words!!Keep going!!!
2007-07-27 17:11:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it plenty!! it extremely is good, a splash cheesey at areas, yet some females quite choose for that! however the dude above is right (redsox) careful making use of the be conscious love becuase it would desire to scare her, and in case you have basically prevalent her a short collectively because it would be quite awkward for her. indexed right here are some quite quite minor transformations: It’s annoying to locate the main suitable words, to declare what's in my coronary heart. I don’t be conscious of the place the top will lead, yet you are the start. it began when I observed you. My coronary heart, it beats so quickly. I knew deep down interior my soul, That joyous 2d might final. getting to be conscious of you basically greater suitable My hearts thoughts of affection. On a dismal day of melancholy, You shine like a morning dove. Your elegance is nearly a rose, the 2d it starts to bloom. Your smile is luminescent, lights up the darkest room. Your eyes are like stars, Picked ideal from the night. they're like diamonds, Shining O’ so bright. however the brightest element approximately you, It’s your character. it is like my coronary heart is a locked door, and you are the main. and each and every time you snicker, I swear an angel performs a be conscious. the recommendations-blowing sound which comes off that harp, won't be able to additionally be wrote. And now which you be conscious of my secret, i'm quite beggin’, might you want to spend a while with me? i for my section love you, Megan.
2016-09-30 22:52:01 · answer #2 · answered by monte 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, that's wonderful. It is a wonderful, straight poem, the kind I like, where the meaning is quite clear. A star for it. It can be made publishing material. Just replace the 'u' with 'you' (Have YOU ever wished...). Then, it looks more publishable and appreciable.
2007-07-27 23:23:57 · answer #3 · answered by Akilesh - Internet Undertaker 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, get with a song writer, you've got a hit.
2007-07-27 17:11:56 · answer #4 · answered by Glinda W 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was wonderfull!OMG!
I write a lot of poems but never can do one like that!
2007-07-27 17:12:48 · answer #5 · answered by Rachel L 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's really cute I liked it A lot !
2007-07-27 17:33:27 · answer #6 · answered by J@de 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats soooooo pretty have u ever thought about gettin it published
2007-07-27 17:15:21 · answer #7 · answered by topaz 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Kind of sappy
2007-07-27 19:13:09 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
wow that was awesome. i expected some corny sh*t but that was good. ur my hero
2007-07-27 17:07:47 · answer #9 · answered by jenius1392 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
omg that is so great i loved it
2007-07-27 17:04:11 · answer #10 · answered by Kathryn P 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋