Will you review my short story?

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I can't fit it here but here's where it's posted.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60593423/

2007-07-25 08:34:12 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys

I encourage advanced critique but please don't insult me.

2007-07-25 08:35:17 · update #1

What you have is a nice draft of ideas. Keep working on it....you have a nice idea.

2007-07-25 09:44:58 · answer #1 · answered by Zombie Birdhouse 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

great read....You have great talent and a wonderful way with words!

2007-07-25 08:47:22 · answer #2 · answered by b 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋