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I am about to post an advertisement over my website intending to attract creative people to sell their product through my site.
However, I am not so sure if the next 2 sentences are making any sense (this is just a small part of the entire posting).

1. Craft your flair and sell it
2. ACH company inspiring you to aptitude your whims.

Your advice and suggestion regarding this advertisement will be much appreciated.

Regards
Eric Greenblatt

2007-07-24 04:15:37 · 4 answers · asked by Hot Eric G. 1 in Education & Reference Other - Education

4 answers

"To aptitude" in sentence number two is being used as an infinitive (to + a verb); however, the word aptitude is not a verb. It is a noun. I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to communicate in the second example, so I'm struggling with offering some possible replacements, but here goes (just be sure you check definitions for yourself before using them): to capitalize, to build upon, to profit from, to benefit from, to take advantage of, etc. Try a thesauraus for other suggestions.

The first sentence "Craft your flair" appears to be grammatically/structurally correct but rather obtuse-sounding, in my opinion, but then again, I may not be the customer-base you are trying to attract.

Best Wishes!

2007-07-24 05:19:21 · answer #1 · answered by deliberateliteratejen 2 · 0 0

Craft ur flair & sell it sounds good to me no problem...
& the other i think ACH company inspires your aptitude to achieve your whims

2007-07-24 04:24:34 · answer #2 · answered by just answering 2 · 0 0

1. I like it, it's unique and says a lot.

2, Aptitude is not the right word there....not sure about whims.

2007-07-24 04:23:42 · answer #3 · answered by Marvinator 7 · 0 0

i might say "Mike made his previous statements to deceive you." Or, if it must be longer, i might use "the reason Mike made his previous statements became to deceive you." once you have a individual's call, it is right to apply a private pronoun (his.) once you employ the previous demanding as quickly as (made) it is right to maintain it during the sentence, different than in relatively uncommon cases (became.)

2016-12-14 17:21:54 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

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