How is it that the true wise
Appear as fools
How is it that the true rich
Appear as poor
What trickery of God is this
That the king be born in a manger
Why does the Lord
Sit with the low and humble
Why should the Almighty
Allow himself to be nailed to a tree
Why does he that sits upon the throne
In the heaven of heavens
And control the atoms
And sets the stars
And knows tomorrow
And dwells in eternity
Why does he consider me?
The Wind told me once
Your are a stranger
That sojourns in a strange land
Work, while it is day
For after that
There is a place prepared for you
How is it that of all the powers in the world
Mercy and Love are the greatest
2007-07-21 15:13:56 · 12 answers · asked by ignoramus_the_great 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
How is it that of all the powers in the world, mercy and love are the greatest? Because Mercy and Love are the truest reflection of the Creator Himself; and are the answer to all your other questions as well.
2007-07-21 15:20:53 · answer #1 · answered by mizicepickle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You really don't have much structure. You need some kind of punctuation to tell the reader when to pause and when to keep going. Not all poems have to rhyme.
2007-07-21 22:20:11 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very lovely. I'm a big poet myself. I think your use of imagery and metaphors embodied very clear thoughts. I love the choice of words. You should work on the stanzas and how you order them. But very well written. Keep sharing.
2007-07-21 22:23:47 · answer #3 · answered by ۩MoonLit Muslima۩ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ehhh ive seen better, your sybolism doesnt give me another perspective on life, its just like yeah that kinda makes sense
2007-07-21 22:18:07 · answer #4 · answered by idk474 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love the wording and the whole "structure" of it but you need to do better on the rhyming.
2007-07-21 22:16:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome poem...keep witting and sharing.
Blessings.
2007-07-21 22:38:36 · answer #6 · answered by Jan P 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats is very sweet if u composed that you have done extremely well.
2007-07-21 22:16:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats a really nice poem!
i dig it
2007-07-21 22:16:15 · answer #8 · answered by jessyfiend 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
nice, can I copy this to my blog?
2007-07-21 22:16:33 · answer #9 · answered by marhama 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
zzzzzzz....
Put it on your 360 page.
2007-07-21 22:16:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋