Science Fiction Part 3. Do I still go on?

Question

Ah, she thought, can there be a story here?

She called out to the male, "Peace to you. Why are you sitting on that rock?"

The male turned to face her, but said nothing.
The female shouted again, "Please come here, I must ask you a question."
The male became curious. He rose slowly and carefully made his way to the sand. Still, he said nothing.
"You do not speak," the female said, "perhaps you are unable to speak?"
"I can speak," the male answered, but I prefer not to do so."
Ignoring this remark, the female continued, "I am called Elaine. What are you called?"
"This is not for you to know," the male replied. "However, you may call me by your first initial."
"You wish me to call you "E?"
"Yes."
"Peace then, E. Now, why were you sitting in such a dangerous place?"
"You are curious, like me," E said. "Therefore, I will tell you."

To E: You're kidding, right? This is a STORY. The narrator is God. He is telling a story to his listeners. The narrator always knows all.

Hey, Tige, maybe people should stop writing poetry, also?

Answer 1

"OMGoodness!!!"
Erik was amazed by the subtlety of the story, believing that its unfolding had been skillfully executed.
"I'm not too sure where this girl is going, but I'm going along for the ride. Although, I wonder why this alien being can hear the characters in this story, seeing as how it is so far away?"

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Answer 2

So - there is a part 1 and 2 so I would know there is a narrarator who is god? and it is in this category, why?

Incorrect category postings can lead to answers that you do not want and are not helpful to anyone. Since this is a forum for Q & A perhaps there is a better place to test your writing skills?

Answer 3

aww. thats really good.
you should be an author.
just like in E's question. you know the one about the person above you. you answered right before me. i guess i was right. check it out.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylc=X3oDMTB1a2x0anY5BF9TAzIxMTU1MDA0NDMEc2VjA3BlZXBfZQRzbGsDcQ--?qid=20070720013434AA8bnTl

email me some more of the story at [e-mail]

xoxo
thanks

Answer 4

I ate the last jelly donut. Don't tell the fuzz.

Answer 5

wow.. that's so cool and understanding. Star for you

Answer 6

no please