To whom it may concern,
I’m supposed to write an English version advertisement for our company. But English is not my first language. Would some people nicely check my grammar and etc. and tell me the revised version? Thank you so much!!!
Professional service all the time
*** Professional sellers and customer service director visit regularly
*** Professional creativity term make the commercial advertisement with international level
*** Help you promote marketing ability, improve the achievement of exporting
*** Product information divided according to the industry
*** From the first moment you work with us, we will be devoted ourselves to helping you succeed.
2007-07-15 16:39:12 · 3 answers · asked by wen 5 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Professional service at all times
***Professional sales personnel and the customer service director will visit you regularly.
***Our creative team will handle the advertisements on an international level
***We will help you with marketing and help you attain your exporting goals
***Product info - don't know what you are trying to say
***We will devote ourselves to helping you succeed. We consider your success our success.
2007-07-15 16:51:21 · answer #1 · answered by lcmcpa 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Professional service all the time!
*** Our professional sellers and customer service directors visit regularly
*** Professional creativity team makes commercial advertisements at aninternational level
*** Help you improve marketing ability, enhance your exporting capabilities
*** Product information divided according to the industry
*** From the first moment you work with us, we will devote ourselves to helping you succeed!
2007-07-15 17:01:58 · answer #2 · answered by jro660 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here are my suggestions, I hope they help!
We offer Professional Services 24/7 (24 hours per day, 7 days a week)
Our team of professionals can help you create effective, international commerical advertising.
We can help you promote your marketing ability and improve your exporting success.
We can provide accurate product information, specific to each industry
We are committed to helping you succeed.
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2007-07-15 16:58:22 · answer #3 · answered by hunter621 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋