This was written by a friend of mine, just a few moments ago, and he wanted to know everyone's thought...
I'm a true homeboy from the streets,
always looking for my beats.
Well, I've found them in the one at home,
there in everything, I'm not alone.
(((Lovely Love)))
2007-07-15 15:30:48 · 29 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Note::
If you do not see the underlining spirituality in these words... keep digging. There is more to these words than meets the eye.
2007-07-15 15:39:46 · update #1
Reply to my brother -drifter-::
We --(the friend and I)-- will take our tea, with beats, please. ;-) Maybe even some lyrical tea. ;-)
2007-07-15 15:41:33 · update #2
Sounds like the beginning of a cool song...needs more of the story but this would be a great "chorus" (refrain)...I know I heard music in my head as I read it *smile*
2007-07-15 16:09:48 · answer #1 · answered by KAL 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I guess it's okay. I am not quite sure what the author is trying to say however. Poetry usually passes a message on to the reader. I have read some excellent poetry--I love to read poetry---this one is kind of unfinished, I think. ((Blessings))
2007-07-15 22:41:19 · answer #2 · answered by Native Spirit 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I think it's cosmic. How do you like your tea? *sip*
I seemed to have shed this skin,
it happens you know when one goes in.
Now I find myself in this cosmic play,
joy in the now not in another day.
2007-07-15 22:39:12 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 7⤊ 0⤋
I think is has a lot of creativity in it I wish I could write poems my poems are the worst.
*Thumbs Up*
2007-07-15 22:34:37 · answer #4 · answered by TEFMLB 3 · 4⤊ 1⤋
Lovely lovely poem, great job..
2007-07-15 22:42:37 · answer #5 · answered by jackie 6 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Too obvious. Just keep working.
2007-07-15 22:36:03 · answer #6 · answered by Murphycr 3 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Where's the religion and spirituality in this?
2007-07-15 22:32:40 · answer #7 · answered by claimsadjuster 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Thank you for sharing the poem...
2007-07-15 22:49:41 · answer #8 · answered by cosmicyoda 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Kinda cute. Better than I could do!
2007-07-15 22:33:34 · answer #9 · answered by Freedom 7 · 4⤊ 1⤋
It needs something
2007-07-15 22:33:26 · answer #10 · answered by Don W 6 · 4⤊ 0⤋