One abones time, their was a boy who do bad things. He was drinking, smoking, slepping at mednight, stelling and fight with his pearants. he was a bad boy. he didn`t listeon to his pearnts. One day, he had head ack, so he disided to visit the doctor and know what wrong with him. he went to the hospital, and he was serppriesed. Do you know what did the doctor tell him??, Do you know what did he hear?? The doctor told him that he had a conslor and he might die after few month. His hart was broken.he was like some one fill down from the sky.he felt like a baird in a jill. He start to cry. He didn't know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his pearants and his friend. his life started to change. He started to respict his perants. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stelling. He had an a poemant after one month, so he disided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn't have any thing. He told him that he is not sick. He asked the doctor how that came, the doctor told him it was not his analysis it was for another person. He didn't belive that, so he started to cry and cry. he was like new person who born just this moment. He was very happy. he was like a drowning who escape from the death. He thaked god for that and come to a decision that he will not cahnge his behavior, and he will be a good person.
I learn from this person that As you sow, so will you reapound every man has his faults so every man have to know about his faults. Also it is no use cuying over spilt milk. Finally where thave's a will, there's away.
2007-07-15 12:49:35 · 6 answers · asked by jhjh 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
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2007-07-15 12:59:32 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 4⤋
Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He was drinking, smoking, going to sleep at midnight, stealing, and fighting with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn`t listen to his parents. One day, he had headache, so he decided to visit the doctor and find out what was wrong with him. He went to the hospital, and he was surprised. Do you know what the doctor told him?? Do you know what he heard?? The doctor told him that he had cancer and he might die in a few months. His heart was broken. He was like someone who fell down from the sky. He felt like a bird in a cage. He started to cry. He didn't know what to do, where to go, or how to tell his parents and his friends. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an appointment one month later, so he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn't have anything. He told him that he is not sick. He asked the doctor how that happened. The doctor told him it was not his analysis. It was for another person. He didn't believe that, so he started to cry and cry. He was like new person who was born just this moment. He was very happy. He was like a drowning man who escaped death. He thanked God for that and came to a decision that he would not change his behavior, and he would be a good person.
I learned from this person that "As you sow, so will you reap" and every man has his faults so every man has to know about his faults. Also it is no use crying over spilt milk. Finally, where there's a will, there's a way.
I corrected your story above. I think your spoken English must be good. You need to work on spelling, especially the different ways to spell the "long e" sound (decide, sleeping, stealing, believe) and "r-controlled vowels" (bird, parents, surprised, heart).
Also, for questions that start with "do you know", use the past tense form of the verb in place of "did".
Example 1: "What did the doctor tell him?" changes to "Do you know what the doctor told him?"
Example 2: "What did he hear?" changes to "Do you know what he heard?"
Good luck!
2007-07-15 13:13:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He was drinking, smoking, sleeping at midnight, stealing and fighting with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn`t listen to his parents. One day, he had a headache. So he decided to visit the doctor and find out whats wrong with him. He went to the hospital and he was surprised. Do you know what did the doctor told him? Do you know what he heard? The doctor told him that he had a cancer and he might die after a few months. His heart was broken. He was like someone who fell down from the sky. He felt like a bird in a jail. He started to cry. He didn't know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his parents and his friend. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an appointment after one month. So he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn't have anything. He told him that he is not sick. He asked the doctor how come. The doctor told him it was not his analysis it was for another person. He didn't believe that, so he started to cry and cry. He was like a new person who was just born just this moment. He was very happy. He was like a drowning person who escaped from the death. He thanked God for that and came to a decision that he will not change his behavior, and he will be a good person.
I learned from this person that as you sow, so shall you reap on every man has his faults so every man have to know about his faults. Also it is no use crying over spilled milk. Finally, where there's a will, there's a way.
2007-07-15 13:10:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He used to drink, smoke, go to bed at midnight, steal and fight with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn`t listen to his parents. One day, he had a headache, so he didn't visit the doctor to find out what was wrong with him, he went to the hospital, and he was shocked. Do you know what the doctor told him??, Do you know what he heard?? The doctor told him that he had cancer and he might die in a few months. His heart was broken. He was like some one who had fallen down from the sky, he felt like a bird in a cage. He started to cry. He didn't know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his parents and his friend. His life started to change. He started to respect his perants. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an apointment one month later, so he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he didn't have any thing wrong. He told him that he was not sick. He asked the doctor how that came about and the doctor told him that it was not his analysis it was for another person. He didn't believe that, so he started to cry and cry. He was like new person who had been reborn. He was very happy. he was like a drowning man who had escaped death. He thanked God for that and came to a decision that he would not change his new behavior, and he would be a good person.
I learned from this person that as you sow, so will you reap and every man has his faults so every man has to know about his faults. Also it is no use crying over spilt milk. Finally where there's a will, there's a way.
2007-07-15 13:06:44 · answer #4 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Once upon a time, there was a boy who did bad things. He was drinking, smoking and stealing. He never went to bed before midnight. He was constantly fighting with his parents. He was a bad boy. He didn’t listen to his parents. One day, he had a head ache, so he decided to visit the doctor and find out what wrong with him. He went to the hospital, and he was surprised. Do you know what the doctor told him? Do you know what he heard? The doctor told him that he had cancer and that he might die after few months. His heart was broken. He was like some one that fell from the sky. He started to cry. He didn't know what to do, where to go, and how to tell his parents and his friends. His life started to change. He started to respect his parents. He started to stop drinking, smoking, and stealing. He had an appointment after one month, so he decided to visit the doctor again. The doctor told him that he wasn’t sick. He asked the doctor how that happened. The doctor told him the samples were switched and that his diagnosis had been determined by someone else’s data. He didn't believe that, so he started to cry and cry. He was like new person who was born this very moment. He was very happy. He was like a drowning victim who had escaped from the death. He thanked god for that and came to a decision. He decided to continue with his good behavior, and to try to be better person.
I learned from this person that… I HAVE WAY TO MUCH TIME ON MY HANDS!
2007-07-15 13:29:02 · answer #5 · answered by Traveler 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My call is Tara. Born and raised in Orlando, Florida, i'm 21 years old. approximately ??? years in the past, I moved to Tampa, FL the place i'm an entire time pupil at USF. i would be graduating presently. My substantial courses of learn are administration and ___. My enthusiasm to variety returned is robust. I did some modeling while i became youthful and concept i'd provide it yet another shot. right here i'm! Smiling and making human beings smile is what makes me happiest. each and every now and then I’m goofy, different cases extreme. My pastimes comprise drawing, writing, shooting of the places I pass to, making a song alongside to song once I rigidity, working, spending time with my boyfriend and the human beings i like... and purely having relaxing. After a million or 2 cases, stay away from beginning up sentences with “I”. ***
2016-09-30 01:49:39 · answer #6 · answered by shenk 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋