Is this a good poem?PLeeeez rate and any comments?

Question

Our love.

We loved like nobody before,
our passion was strong,
and full of power.

I new we had something,
lik we were meant for eachother,
So i told a joke,
And i drooled over your laughter.

I Wish others would understand,
all the passion that we had.
But i guess no one did.
Its okay as long as we are together,
as long as our love last forever.

Answer 1

Here is your poem with the changes I feel you should make to it:

Our Love

We love like nobody before,
our passion is strong
and full of power.

I know we have something,
Like we are meant for each other,
So I told a joke,
and I drooled over your laughter.

I wish others would understand,
all the passion that we have.
But I guess no one does.
It's okay as long as we are together,
as long as our love lasts forever.

After you make all those corrections go here and submit it: http://poetry.com/index.asp

Best wishes!

Answer 2

If this were a music composition, it would be categorized as through-composed. Reason, your stanzas are not consistent within it's form, length and meter.

A few things to remember about poetry:
1. Each line should begin using capitalization.
2. Metric consistency can control your rhythmic flow. Thus, eliciting certain emotional responses from your audience.

As far as it being good, or not, is completely subjective. Some people may like it. Others, not.
However, if your poetry is for some type of class assignment, then like, or dislike, is not as important as following the guidelines.

Answer 3

Try falling in love before you write about it.
Love is wanting the other person to be happy. This sounds like you are seeking approval or trying to look cool.

Answer 4

Kind of messy. A little too cold to be about love.

Answer 5

Great! Keep writing!

Answer 6

for a start is very nice.. who knows maybe you'll be a poet in the future.