A Woman's Stride
By Semper Fi 83 7/14/07
God sat in Heaven,
Where he abides.
And He thought to create,
A Woman's Stride.
For a woman's pride,
He found in Eden in the garden He made.
When Eve gave Adam from the tree He forbade.
From there,
Man thought he'd push woman aside.
But she kept her pride in her stride.
She kept her pride in her stride.
Throughout history,
Over all creation.
It is she who carried,
And birthed the nations.
While men fought wars,
She fought for rights.
Man fought for land,
She fought for life.
She even let the man,
Keep his foolish pride.
For she controls them all,
With her stride.
2007-07-14 10:17:57 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Davee 777, read my profile. I do read the Bible, believe the Bible, and OBEY the Bible. Perhaps that's why I don't have the Holier than thou disease.
2007-07-15 03:23:20 · update #1
This is equally as beautiful as your last poem. It makes me feel really proud for the fact of being a woman, and knowing that somebody understands all that woman has endured. I really love the last 4 lines. I also love the title (lol). All women should really feel appreciated with this poem, and loved by God.
2007-07-14 11:14:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I am bowing down to your wife right now because she has the TRUE example of how a "REAL MAN" looks at a woman!!!
This poem is truly amazing. You wrote with passion, sincerity and love.
Like I wrote before, I am one of the many who are honored to have had the privilege of reading your work. God has given you not just a talent, but a gift. The gift of respect, trust, sharing and honesty in your writings.
Once again, THANK YOU!!
I don't know if this is appropriate, but I would love to have some copies of your poems if you want/can send them to my 360 address.
2007-07-15 02:21:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome.
But in a Christian marriage, hopefully the man & the woman can match strides and walk together.
Blessings.
2007-07-14 17:29:56 · answer #3 · answered by Jan P 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
What a truly moving and lovely poem, it flows beautifully and the message conveyed is simply sublime.
I really love your works, I am always amazed at the depth of sincerity, and realization in them.
You are an inspiration my brother...Truly.
Blessings and love,
Sassy
2007-07-15 02:09:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Thank-you for writing such a lovely poem for women; it;s really sweet of you.,. You rock Semper -Fi
2007-07-14 18:35:39 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
My first reading this morning: thank you for making my day
2007-07-14 17:33:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
If Eve had just "strode" her smartly bottom over to ask Adam about what the snake had said, WE would not be in this mess.
IT WAS A PARTNERSHIP WHICH SHE BROKE BY NOT CONSULTING HIM.
(neener)
dave
2007-07-14 21:14:39 · answer #7 · answered by dave777 4 · 3⤊ 3⤋
that is a really touching one.
make me feel proud being a woman
2007-07-14 17:22:58 · answer #8 · answered by Ravina 1 · 4⤊ 1⤋
thank you Semper that was beautiful.
at least there is 1 man who understands in this world all the sacrifice us women make to please man.
GOD BLESS!!!!!!!
2007-07-14 20:01:11 · answer #9 · answered by TA 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
awesme poem!!!
its says alot about the part women play
in the world.
2007-07-14 17:22:57 · answer #10 · answered by rhcp rules 3 · 4⤊ 1⤋