Now she steps into the ring
And in the few the bell will ring
I see the odds aren't very good
But I will bet her like I should
She's looking good all dressed in gold
But now she's in a strangle hold
She whispers something in his ear
It wasn't loud it wasn't clear
From where I'm sitting in the stands
I try to look but see no hands
But now he's looking all excited
He says to her, am I invited
I quess it was a dirty trick
She hit him hard, like from a brick
And then he's stumbling round and round
And now he's fallen to the ground
He says to her that shot was cheap
But with that breath he fell asleep
Her hands now pounding to her chest
I told you guys I was the best
2007-07-14 01:12:30 · 5 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It actually made me laugh out loud, especially that final line :D
2007-07-14 01:21:44 · answer #1 · answered by lilykdesign 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is this the same woman who was undressed out on the lawn a few poems ago with some guy? Quite a woman. Or you have a great imagination.
2007-07-16 17:15:16 · answer #2 · answered by margot 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
attempt this: She then chased that bull stunning in the process the gate She says, come on back and meet your destiny The bull then runs stunning throughout the time of a backyard yet she will't benefit floor with extreme heels on She then runs into our neighbor Noah She pushes him stunning off his mower She places that element in optimal equipment And catches as much as that bull's rear Now i haven't seen a pass as stranger My spouse placed that bull in grave possibility- She does a turn stunning in the air She knows she'll land, do exactly no longer comprehend the place i do no longer comprehend how she did that landing stunning on his back, with the two ft status She then shows that bull his torn off tail She says, your have been given me mad I broke a nail The bull knows there is not any the place to bypass she would be waiting to discover me, he does comprehend Now while the bulls see who's a ideal to journey in the event that they see her, they run and conceal
2016-10-01 14:24:52 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good@! I'd say "like with a brick", but other than that, it was consistent and flowed very well.
Again, nicely done.
2007-07-16 19:33:14 · answer #4 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ha Ha love it
2007-07-14 01:22:47 · answer #5 · answered by Rebecca 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋