Every dream that's ever touched me
Every breath I've ever made
Every song that lives inside me
Every ounce of love ever gave
Only one heart cools this fire
Only one heart dries my tears
Only one heart beats with mine
And takes away my fears
And I realize, and I hold on
The only heart to get me through
My everything, my world, my love
My heart is completely with you
2007-07-13 16:13:34 · 8 answers · asked by hkyman9999 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
AWWWWWWWWW i think that is very sweet, she should have more confidence in what she writes because its beautiful ;)
2007-07-13 16:18:51 · answer #1 · answered by ~Anonymous~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
in case you wrote this in 2008, do you nevertheless have a similar woman buddy? if so congratulations, have you ever given HER the poem to study? Poetry used for the point of seduction is an previous trick as previous because of the fact the hills, sorry approximately my ideas-set at present ... basically sayin'
2016-09-29 23:13:24 · answer #2 · answered by dorthy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a very good poem. She should enter it into a poem contest. Have her go to www.poetry.com. I did it once and almost won. It's really cool and she could win money....
2007-07-13 16:18:21 · answer #3 · answered by antnstacie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If your girlfriend wrote it to you, you should appreciate it and thank her for it no matter how much you dislike the poem. In my opinion it's very sweet.
2007-07-13 16:16:07 · answer #4 · answered by Someone 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very sweet.
2007-07-13 16:16:27 · answer #5 · answered by Stephen L 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwww....thats very sweet! its a really good poem too
2007-07-13 16:21:11 · answer #6 · answered by ♥hemakesmesmile♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ya, its nice.
2007-07-13 16:16:53 · answer #7 · answered by Mandy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, its simple and very sincere and i don't know its just............. Beautiful in message and sincerity.
2007-07-13 16:19:27 · answer #8 · answered by NEEDHELP!!!! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋