Do you understand this sentence, or I need to improve the wording?

Question

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Those countries been able to supply cocoa beans that meet that international standard. The cocoa that they have sent have even gone through fragmentation process. The AMARTA project also represents a video about the handling of pest and disease. The video presented is quite interactive and easy to understand for the farmers.

Answer 1

Your Version:

Those countries been able to supply cocoa beans that meet that international standard. The cocoa that they have sent have even gone through fragmentation process. The AMARTA project also represents a video about the handling of pest and disease. The video presented is quite interactive and easy to understand for the farmers.
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My Version:

The countries that meet international standards are able to supply cocoa beans. This export has gone through the fragmentation process. This process along with the AMARTA project also aid in handling pests and disease through interactive videos that are understandable to the farmers.
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I don't know what the fragmentation process is or if it has anything to do with pests and disease removal.

> You should keep the sentences in your paragraph relative to each other. For instance you speak about the standard and than it jumps down to interactive videos without informing the reader what those "standards" are?

> Your sentences border on sentence fragments. You need to beef up your sentences with more detail.

> easy to understand = understandable. Erase the "easy to"

> The last sentence is a bit arrogant and rude.

Answer 2

Those countries have been able to supply cocoa beans that meet the international standard. The cocoa that they have sent has even gone through the fragmentation process. The AMARTA project also provides an interactive video about the handling of pests and disease that is easy for the farmers to understand.

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Answer 3

Those countries HAVE been able to supply cocoa beans that meet THE international standard. The SUPPLIED cocoa HAS gone through the fragmentation process... The PRESENTED video is interactive and COMPREHENSIBLE for the farmers.

Answer 4

Those countries that have been able to supply cocoa beans have meet the international standard and have gone through a fragmentation process. And the last two sentences should be complied into one.

Answer 5

is that what you're writing? is it in response to a question or is it a portion of an essay?

•have you already established which Countries and what the international standard is?

•what is AMARTA and what have they done that you are able to use the conjuntcting word 'also' you need to specify that before relating it to the video

Answer 6

Improve.

Answer 7

Yeah, you've got to do some work on it.

Answer 8

rewrite it, grammar errors left and right.