We are together and I am holding you in my arms.
I turn my head to look at you as we lay under the stars.
How beautiful and peaceful on my shoulder you lean,
This would have been a perfect night,
if only it wasnt a dream
2007-07-08 19:04:21 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
I like it so far but you should add more its kinda short but still pretty good
2007-07-08 20:42:25 · answer #1 · answered by Saerah 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem is sweet
your accomplished your feat
i hope the perfect one you'll meet
this game you will beat
and
with great poets you will have a seat
2007-07-08 22:03:24 · answer #2 · answered by poilkj 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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yes i like, but then
why don`t you do something to turn
the dream in to reyality,
believe you me,
one can do... so
make it happen,
have a nice day,
2007-07-08 19:22:50 · answer #3 · answered by Karsan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked it.
i said it on the last question
2007-07-08 19:10:27 · answer #4 · answered by ~I wish you could smile~ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was ok. you should add to it, it's a little short.
2007-07-08 19:13:22 · answer #5 · answered by deucesuppity 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...yep...anytime somebody writes from their heart...I appreciate it...because u can feel it...thanks...write more....oh...and go out of ur way to make it real.Ask him...if he says no...find another him.
2007-07-08 19:10:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No...and why are you in "Religion & Spirtuality!"
2007-07-08 19:07:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋